MaxAnstey Posted January 10, 2009 Author Share Posted January 10, 2009 Please vote. first ever simple newbie (on my game) sprite.BEFOREAFTERUGH help with the hairyes. if you would like to improve. much appreciated.EDIT: as you can see, i cant do hair on the side…help please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 He's bald on the back of his head, plus he has a gut. Try to fix thoes un-appealing features… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaxAnstey Posted January 10, 2009 Author Share Posted January 10, 2009 he has a gut? i dont understand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
munro Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 @MaxAnstey:> he has a gut? i dont understandHe is kinda fat is what he's saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrNova Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 not bad. Woulda gave it a 7, but you skipped it so I gave it a 6. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaxAnstey Posted January 10, 2009 Author Share Posted January 10, 2009 Thanks! will update in… 30minutes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrNova Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 I think the "gut" is fine, gives some mass, otherwise would look very weird, specially with the large head.I think its a suitable style, stays in porportion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 the base sprite looks familiar. Is it your template? Or perhaps an edit from one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaxAnstey Posted January 10, 2009 Author Share Posted January 10, 2009 you know when i was raving about the sticking and front paged templates. yeah this is one of them. but kreator. if you could be the best. can i send you my version of the template and you make a female version of it?pleaaase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 Hair on sides looks weird.Toutefois, c'est bien pour un debutant ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaxAnstey Posted January 10, 2009 Author Share Posted January 10, 2009 im 13 and only understood c'est bien (its good)pour mm.. forgot. and i no degoutant - disgusting lol.yeah can i have some helo with the side hair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dray777 Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 GREAT JOB!!! im 13 and i just started and i don't even know how to make sprites. infact if anyone can help a nooblet please send me info on how to make sprites. acutally send me info about anything because i had no experience of any of this i just found it and thought it'd be fun so i downloaded it =/ ( this has gone on long enough) so yea send me any advice n stuff and again great job anstey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chakkra Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 Toutefois, c'est bien pour un debutant – He said "However, it's good for a beginner" or something similar to that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaxAnstey Posted January 10, 2009 Author Share Posted January 10, 2009 dray i would. but idk how i did it…just...got a naked man and coloured in with 3 shades. the hair was a fluke. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devogen Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 Reminds me of Alex Kidd on my Sega Master System - the sprite appeals to me in a nostalgic fashion, but other than that it's not something I'd use myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 @MaxAnstey:> but kreator. if you could be the best. can i send you my version of the template and you make a female version of it?> pleaaaseIf you send me money over with the template, else no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devogen Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 @Kreator:> If you send me money over with the template, else no.I got this PM also out of the blue, before i even looked here:> can i please can i have a female v. of this pretty please> http://i41.tinypic.com/1sgp4h.png> thanks alotto which i declined… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 Uh guys, just noticed that that sprite isn't his. Its a template, available on RMXP.org. Be aware that all he done was added hair, and the clothes.MaxAnstey, you should have made it more clear you used a template. You gave across the impression you made the entire thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaxAnstey Posted January 10, 2009 Author Share Posted January 10, 2009 Well done kreator you can read.you know when i was raving about the sticking and front paged templates. yeah this is one of them. but kreator. if you could be the best. can i send you my version of the template and you make a female version of it?pleaaasethanks for pointing that out, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 Kreator you amaze me - I've noticed it on first sight xDMax just try and maybee you'll manage to do the boobs right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaxAnstey Posted January 10, 2009 Author Share Posted January 10, 2009 yeah, lol i may aswell try i suppose.thanks for the CONSTRUCTIVE critism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted January 10, 2009 Share Posted January 10, 2009 @MaxAnstey:> Well done kreator you can read.well done, so can you.@Kreator:> MaxAnstey, you should have made it more clear you used a template. You gave across the impression you made the entire thing.Perhaps mentioning it in your actual first post?@MaxAnstey:> Please vote. first ever simple newbie (on my game) sprite.Your first ever sprite. The image you shown was a sprite. You seemed to claimed it all. You never said that just the hair, shirt and pants was yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demon xxx x Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 xD Yeah, that would be plagerism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marsh Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 That's what the template is for. But the creators still like credit where it is due. Next time you should mention it. Just add some credit to your post it only takes a second then everyone will let it go. Since its just a simple mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaxAnstey Posted January 14, 2009 Author Share Posted January 14, 2009 ok. but i still need help with the side frame hair and i cant credit. i dont know the creator :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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