@Bone: > I voted cute because thats what it is, > I wouldn't give it to her (That might just be me though) > Because it borders on the edge of creepiness/stalker > > The rhyming scheme is pretty plain as someone already said > > But practice makes perfect > I say just improve it and then do it, but if she said no already then I dunno… don't push it right We're already amazingly close. i wouldnt go up to some random girl with it lol.