magezhilo Posted November 13, 2010 Author Share Posted November 13, 2010 **LARGE IMAGE WARNING!**This is where I post my art junk.**LOOK ON LAST PAGE FOR BETTER ART!**![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/0ceea69ff7942fd3db4b70e26d8563c3.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobody Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 :O nice draw yourself wresting lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamesucker Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 I liked the first two, they made me laugh & they were (as far as I'm concerned) flawless.the third ones head is a little… awkward.the fourths background is terrible. (did you draw it? because it looks like you simply copyed+pasted the scorpion onto that sand.)on the fifth the elbows don't really come in contact with the legs, they just hover above them.Don't get me wrong, they're all great, but they could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted November 13, 2010 Author Share Posted November 13, 2010 @Nobody:> :O nice draw yourself wresting lolTrust me, I've thought about it. I really should too cause the muscle depth is crazy when people wrestle.@Batman:> I liked the first two, they made me laugh & they were (as far as I'm concerned) flawless.> the third ones head is a little… awkward.> the fourths background is terrible. (did you draw it? because it looks like you simply copyed+pasted the scorpion onto that sand.)> on the fifth the elbows don't really come in contact with the legs, they just hover above them.> > Don't get me wrong, they're all great, but they could be better.@third: could it be the fact he has horns…?@fourth: yeah, the background is just some parchment actually that I changed a bit to look more like sand.@fifth: why do the elbows need to come in contact with the legs? :huh:Anyway, thank you for the feedback. This is why I post my art in so many places; it helps me improve much faster because of the amount of critique I recieve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamesucker Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 @Wraith:> @third: could it be the fact he has horns…?> @fourth: yeah, the background is just some parchment actually that I changed a bit to look more like sand.> @fifth: why do the elbows need to come in contact with the legs? :huh:@third: It was more of the flatness of the head combined with how sunken in it was.@fifth: well, they don't… I just thought you were trying to make it look like he was resting his arms on his legs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 You see Wraith, almoast all your drawings are somewhat off - you put a lot of detail in them, I'm sure you give them some time and a lot of effort, but in the end, I never seen a drawing from you that wouldn't have something screwed up - proportions, some detail or body part that seem poinless or stupid. Come on, first one have totaly screwd up wings, I belive I told you that before lol… second one, just look at his hands and legs - are they compleatly fine? Third, well - third is a sketch but it looks fine, can't seem to find anything bad in it, the scorpion have something a bit wrong with it's pincers... and something incredibly wrong with it's shadow. And the last one? Last one looks like a fucking christmass retard (again, the shadows are screwed up - it would suggest that his hand is growing out of nowhere and ends at his wrist).I suggest that you start drawing from nature (still art and from model), go to some art class and shit. Learning how human anatomy, shadows, and shit actualy feel like in the real life will greatly help you working on fantasy stuff - even if you are not going to draw humans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted November 13, 2010 Author Share Posted November 13, 2010 @Kusy:> I suggest that you start drawing from nature (still art and from model), go to some art class and shit. Learning how human anatomy, shadows, and shit actualy feel like in the real life will greatly help you working on fantasy stuff - even if you are not going to draw humans.Like I told Batman, this is why I post my stuff on various forums; so I know what I need to work on. I've already got a basic understanding of human anatomy, but I'm still practicing it. However, I do need to do more life drawings, so I'll start those tomorrow. Also, I'm not just going to be posting a bunch of digitals that I spent a lot of time on. I'm also going to post my studies and stuff aswell.For now though, here's a character I just finished. I've never done any type of sci-fi drawing so sorry if it lacks a bit of creativity.[![](http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/8253/plasmawhipchar.png)](http://img253.imageshack.us/i/plasmawhipchar.png/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamesucker Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 his bottom half lacks detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 Left leg is over muscly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 You seem to draw things apart from eachother, not as a whole… I mean, if you look at the whole image you can instantly see that his leg is fucking humungous. The leg would do fine for it's own but it fails as a part of this picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted November 15, 2010 Author Share Posted November 15, 2010 So I probably should have clarified. I meant to make this thread so I can get general artistic critique. When people critique a single piece of art I've already done then I'll probably just look at it, say "yeah, you're right" and do nothing about it. I'd prefer if people just tell me what I should work on in general on my artwork such as "add more value ranges" or "add more color." Stuff like that.So, for now I have a self portrait that I drew to practice my use of color (yes I know it's skewed, I messed up) and a still life. The still life was drawn with a minimum size 7 brush.[![](http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/8958/sp2a.png)](http://img594.imageshack.us/i/sp2a.png/)[![](http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/628/lifestudy3.png)](http://img149.imageshack.us/i/lifestudy3.png/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted November 15, 2010 Share Posted November 15, 2010 What I'm donig is giving you general advice, it's you who consider it comments on a single pice instead of taking it to heart ;DWork on proportions and draw things as a whole, it seems like you start drawing without a general idea of what it should look like in the end (when doing desing stuff). Draw as a whole, not as four legs, tail, head, ass and then background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted November 17, 2010 Author Share Posted November 17, 2010 @Kusy:> Work on proportions and draw things as a whole, it seems like you start drawing without a general idea of what it should look like in the end (when doing desing stuff). Draw as a whole, not as four legs, tail, head, ass and then background.I do need to work on proportions. I almost always sketch out what I draw digitally before I actually add in anything else so I fix my mistakes, Idk if that's what you mean or not :huh:Just some boring stuff…[![](http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/3315/tigerstudy.png)](http://img301.imageshack.us/i/tigerstudy.png/)[![](http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/6403/lifestudy4.png)](http://img196.imageshack.us/i/lifestudy4.png/)[![](http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3084/doodles3.png)](http://img337.imageshack.us/i/doodles3.png/)[![](http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4932/posemaniacs1.png)](http://img155.imageshack.us/i/posemaniacs1.png/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted November 25, 2010 Author Share Posted November 25, 2010 [![](http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9835/lifestudy5.png)](http://img138.imageshack.us/i/lifestudy5.png/)[![](http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/9238/doodles4.png)](http://img269.imageshack.us/i/doodles4.png/)[![](http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/6564/collective4.png)](http://img593.imageshack.us/i/collective4.png/)[![](http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/4168/perspective1.png)](http://img266.imageshack.us/i/perspective1.png/)[![](http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/8351/loomis1.png)](http://img841.imageshack.us/i/loomis1.png/)[![](http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/495/poses3.png)](http://img251.imageshack.us/i/poses3.png/)Andy Samberg[![](http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/9242/andysamberg.png)](http://img197.imageshack.us/i/andysamberg.png/)My friend wanted me to draw her. So far it looks nothing like her :/[![](http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/6184/nickycopy.png)](http://img543.imageshack.us/i/nickycopy.png/)[![](http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/5845/collective5.png)](http://img542.imageshack.us/i/collective5.png/)Was stuck at a bazaar and all I had was a pen so I tried some stuff from imagination. The arm sucks and the poses' shins are too short.[![](http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/9766/doodles5.png)](http://img541.imageshack.us/i/doodles5.png/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lavos Posted November 25, 2010 Share Posted November 25, 2010 Holy %#!&!!!!!!! *Bookmarked* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted November 25, 2010 Share Posted November 25, 2010 looks pretty nice. I think you need to work on hair though, on all ur newest portraits the hair is messed up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
renzo Posted November 26, 2010 Share Posted November 26, 2010 Beautiful artwork, however your Arizona Can is another case of Mixed perspectives.The word Arizona is straight as if I were looking at it on level ground but there is also a slight over-top view of the can.And the blue man at the bottom of the list has a broken left leg.All in all, keep up the good work. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted December 3, 2010 Author Share Posted December 3, 2010 [![](http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/6184/nickycopy.png)](http://img713.imageshack.us/i/nickycopy.png/)[![](http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/5038/lifestudy6.png)](http://img408.imageshack.us/i/lifestudy6.png/)[![](http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/3562/collective6.png)](http://img811.imageshack.us/i/collective6.png/)[![](http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/6333/collective7.png)](http://img822.imageshack.us/i/collective7.png/)[![](http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/4207/seth5.png)](http://img6.imageshack.us/i/seth5.png/)[![](http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/215/poses5.png)](http://img405.imageshack.us/i/poses5.png/)[![](http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/3238/poses4.png)](http://img839.imageshack.us/i/poses4.png/)[![](http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/2828/collective8.png)](http://img838.imageshack.us/i/collective8.png/)[![](http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/3639/doodles6.png)](http://img217.imageshack.us/i/doodles6.png/)[![](http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5407/scififistblades.png)](http://img828.imageshack.us/i/scififistblades.png/)[![](http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9553/collective9.png)](http://img268.imageshack.us/i/collective9.png/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 I still can't get over the immaculate detail in the picture with the Comcast remote… Simply stunning! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 Looks epic, and your newer hair is so much better. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 Sketches of the poses are <3\. IT WILL ONLY GET BETTERRR ;3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted January 1, 2011 Author Share Posted January 1, 2011 [![](http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/25/poses7.png)](http://img408.imageshack.us/i/poses7.png/)[![](http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/7372/animalstudiesdog3.png)](http://img440.imageshack.us/i/animalstudiesdog3.png/)[![](http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/5305/poses6.png)](http://img408.imageshack.us/i/poses6.png/)[![](http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/1536/lifestudy7.png)](http://img811.imageshack.us/i/lifestudy7.png/)[![](http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/2833/centipede.png)](http://img638.imageshack.us/i/centipede.png/)[![](http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/7582/poses8.png)](http://img821.imageshack.us/i/poses8.png/)[![](http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/5382/watchmen1.png)](http://img831.imageshack.us/i/watchmen1.png/)[![](http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/2421/watchmen2.png)](http://img413.imageshack.us/i/watchmen2.png/)[![](http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1097/willferrell.png)](http://img101.imageshack.us/i/willferrell.png/)[![](http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/5849/lifestudy8.png)](http://img191.imageshack.us/i/lifestudy8.png/)[![](http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8009/darkknight1.png)](http://img149.imageshack.us/i/darkknight1.png/)[![](http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/4998/bridgemanfoot1.png)](http://img524.imageshack.us/i/bridgemanfoot1.png/)[![](http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/4305/bridgemanhands4.png)](http://img264.imageshack.us/i/bridgemanhands4.png/)[![](http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5808/bridgemanarm5.png)](http://img23.imageshack.us/i/bridgemanarm5.png/)[![](http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7680/doodles7.png)](http://img291.imageshack.us/i/doodles7.png/)[![](http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/3181/doodles8.png)](http://img820.imageshack.us/i/doodles8.png/)[![](http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/9600/character2f.png)](http://img5.imageshack.us/i/character2f.png/)[![](http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/7141/character3f.png)](http://img810.imageshack.us/i/character3f.png/)[![](http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/994/spook.png)](http://img513.imageshack.us/i/spook.png/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 Man, these look really good. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 MASSIVELY Impressed. Woah dude some of your work is incredible. Seeing great improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ispan Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 Man that stuff rocks, your work in incredible. Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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