gaming ace Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 Hey guys, I was looking for some feedback on my newest retro/snes tileset, shown in this mockup below. Rate, comment, and criticize!![](http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/2223/conceptartgrasslandmock.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadoweight Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 they seem pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Bob Firefarter Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 For 8-bit.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 eh the cliffs really need to stand out more. at first i thought they were a poorly done path because the edges aren't distinguishable. nice other than that though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Bob Firefarter Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 I agree with Ghost. The ONLY flaw there is is with the cliff face.Other than that, it is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadoweight Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 i could tell it was a cliff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gaming ace Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 Alright awesome, I agree with you Ghost, the cliff is kind of flat. Thanks for the help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 Awesome, I love that old school style. Are these graphics for a project your working on or did you just make 'em? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENIGMAX Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 you got to love anything with the word "retro" in the title… 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Bob Firefarter Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 Would you ever consider releasing a retro tileset? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gaming ace Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 Haha thanks engimax@ᴆᴎᴧ:> Would you ever consider releasing a retro tileset? :3Not this particular tileset, since I'm probably going to me using it for a project of mine, but in the future, there is a chance :cheesy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 Woot, another 16 bit inspired project! I like the grass and trees, but the cliff (which I thought was a path), definately needs some depth, definition, and a palette change. Also, the character's dark armor really conflicts with the feel and palette. Definitely would suggest reworking it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gaming ace Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 Haha, yep. Here's a small update, im currently reworking the cliff. I feel like im on the right path, but im still not quite there yet. Thanks Kreator. Keep in mind, i didn't make these sprites, im using charas-gen, so i may need to tweak them some so that they suit the tiles better. Anyways, heres another mock up with the newest version of the cliff.![](http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/2223/conceptartgrasslandmock.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niko Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 A bit better but the walls to the cliffs go straight up perfectly. I thought it was made of rocks? Ive never seen a cliff made of rocks have a perfectly straight side wall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gaming ace Posted March 22, 2010 Author Share Posted March 22, 2010 Thanks for the advice Niko. Here's yet another small update.![](http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/2223/conceptartgrasslandmock.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adulese Games Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 I personally would lighten your grass pallete. That or darken/switch your rock colors. It still blends in too much. However, pretty damn good so far. 8/10 for the style.- Adulese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niko Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 Id try to add a bit more contrast between the grass and trees as well. They blend together a bit to much as well. Are you using the same pallet for both? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 Sprite reminds me of FSO, very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 Ah I see a slight flaw in the sprite. The one piece of hair which sticks up is darkened on the top. Other than that, I like your sprite.And your tileset is nearly flawless, although I wish youd redo the flower (unless thats how its suppost to look…) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 @Jungletoe:> Ah I see a slight flaw in the sprite. The one piece of hair which sticks up is darkened on the top. Other than that, I like your sprite.> > And your tileset is nearly flawless, although I wish youd redo the flower (unless thats how its suppost to look…)That's how the style looks, on both comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gaming ace Posted March 22, 2010 Author Share Posted March 22, 2010 @Niko:> Id try to add a bit more contrast between the grass and trees as well. They blend together a bit to much as well. Are you using the same pallet for both?Yes, I am. I'll play around with it and see how it looks.@Ddunit:> Sprite reminds me of FSO, very nice.Haha I love the sprite too, but I didn't make it clear that I didn't make it. I'm using charas-gen as well as some self-done pixel work for the sprites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rithy58 Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 That is pretty good. They're kinda similar to FSO.But seem like you fixed the cliff and everything look fine now.Good job.Sincerely,Rithy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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