lc3 Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 I'm just looking for a rating of my work and what i should work on. Please do not say anything too hurtful. :icon_meditation:orb type of spawn gate or just decoration in a mage's chambershieldboots(these literally took 5mins to make)helmspeartook the color/effect out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 the spawn gate looks kinda cool, but i think it uses a lot of effects that i don't consider pixel art. the rest are overly shiny with poor shading and the lineart could be improved. it's definitely not the worst i've ever seen but you do need to work on lineart and shading, and possibly better color choices. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marsh Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 The spawn one looks awesome the rest need a bit of work. You got the basics down from here on out its basically just practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capeless Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 Wow, Nice the spawn one looks good, the rest need a few touches to it.Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lc3 Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 i appreciate the feedback. From now on ill try to focus on choosing the correct colors for a piece. All of these were made off the top of my head. I wasnt trying to make them fit the certain style of certain game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MasterBit13 Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 @lc3:> i appreciate the feedback. From now on ill try to focus on choosing the correct colors for a piece. All of these were made off the top of my head. I wasnt trying to make them fit the certain style of certain game.You being the artist makes only your choice of colors the correct one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 @Bit:> @lc3:> > > i appreciate the feedback. From now on ill try to focus on choosing the correct colors for a piece. All of these were made off the top of my head. I wasnt trying to make them fit the certain style of certain game.> > You being the artist makes only your choice of colors the correct one.That's from a person who is known to make really, really high quality and beautiful art putting in it as much effort as we regular people put in blinking.Read as: If you don't have any knowedgle in a toppic, stay out even if your opinoin seems to make sense or pretends to have any meaning.If you make something that looks like shit you don't explain it by saying "I'm the artist, I'm righ"… word "ARTIST" is the most overused word on the Show Off boards, it's like calling someone who managed to fix two planks together wtih ducktape a carpenter.(no offence ment to the OP really, this is not a repsponse to your work, nor any of those comments are aimed at you or your graphics, I respond to Bit's spam)And getting back on toppic... hmm...-the portal looks quite neat, however as Ghost mentioned not sure if it can be considered pixel graphics.-the shield is fine as a simple icon, however there's nothing outstanding about it, weird choice of colors, and if that something I can see there was suposed to be some kind of and emblem, it's almost invisible.-the boots seem to be two compleatly diffrent things instead of a pair, one is colored difrently, also puttign them closer together would make them seem more like two from the same set instead of compleatly separate.-well... sorry, I have to say it but I think you should check [how a crossbow looks](http://www.shoshone.k12.id.us/medieval/images/crossbow.jpg).-the helmet looks flat, it neads more depth desperately, also it looks kind of damaged, dunno if that was the intention.-again, this is [how a spear looks](http://lonestarknife.com/images/RZ-SpartanSpearK2803.jpg)… what you made is a [trident](http://thedarkblade.com/wp-content/uploads/shadow-strike-trident.jpg). Also, it's really choppy and obviously with wrong proportions, I can understand the colors if you say it's an "ice spear"… same goes for the helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknown Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 Just keep working on it, you'll get it. All of them are usable & the portal looks very cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilbunnie Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 Hey, those look really cool, the portal is the best man, Make more :D[edit:modified by a moderator, thread was cleaned up] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lc3 Posted March 12, 2010 Author Share Posted March 12, 2010 Is it wrong to use effects when the only thing it does is save time?That same effect can be done pixel by pixel it would just take longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 I think its just because the colour count is high. Usualy in Pixel art, you try to use the least possible colours.Good work! Hope you enjoy Eclipse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lc3 Posted March 12, 2010 Author Share Posted March 12, 2010 ill try to keep the amount down.Idk its kinda hard for me lol i like effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HappyBoy Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 Looks cuwl :)I like the:OrbShieldHelmChestThe rest isn't that good imo :pKeep up the good work! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulBlazer Posted March 18, 2010 Share Posted March 18, 2010 I love the spawn gate, it'd be neat to use it in an animation..Other are alright, as said by a lot of people, the colour choices are a bit strange, I'd stick to more realistic colours instead.Keep practising, it'll get better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lc3 Posted April 2, 2010 Author Share Posted April 2, 2010 added some more things still need more practice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sputnak Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 I think they are mostly good I give 3 for all of them but crossbow needs recolouring, it looks a bit like its neon. It would be better if you posted some pictures of characters wearing the equippables and the warp and others where you will probably place them e.g. put a background to show where warp will be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lc3 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Share Posted April 4, 2010 Ahh you mean PPD?tbh i've never tried it. What would be an appropriate sprite/s to attempt it on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted April 5, 2010 Share Posted April 5, 2010 The new ones look cool, but still decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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