dingleberrys Posted March 22, 2010 Author Share Posted March 22, 2010 heres the cover of it Comic is called: The Deleted Archives….. chapter.1[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 cover](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/0%20cover%20wip.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 page 1](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%201.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 2](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%202.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 3](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%203.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 4](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%204.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 5](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%205.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 6](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%206.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 7](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%207.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 8](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%208.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 9](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%209.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 10](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%2010.png)[The Deleted Archives Chapter 1 Page 11](http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/25/1111692/1%20Page%2011.png)btw the name Diagos Brighton is my artist name :Dand the comic has 1 or 2 more pages to gothe story is from a friend of mine and i got paid to make it…... so enjoy! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 The art is definitely good, but *shudders* Furries. D:Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingleberrys Posted March 22, 2010 Author Share Posted March 22, 2010 well its my friends story and characters so it was his call beside im paid so why should i care ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 The drawings are not half bad, you have some nice skills, tho if someone is paying you to do this - he's a total moron, it's not material worth paying for nor paying someone to do it (no offence to you seriuosly).Story doesn't make too much sense but I understand it's not your work.As for cryticism of your work, not the story - some anatomy issues on almost every page, quite random and a bit overused PENCIL shading, boring arangment of bubbles and chaotic composition of the comic, but those two can be blamed on it being your first one.I never did comics - can't seem to find motivation after finishing like, 2 or 3 pages - so that's a plus (even if your motivation was monetary ;D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingleberrys Posted March 22, 2010 Author Share Posted March 22, 2010 yeah well i only started drawing on the 2nd of feb this year so im still learning and it was only £1 per page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pryex Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 I have a distinct dislike of furries…Not the people who are furries, the human animal hybrid things...EEEWWWW.Also, I wish I could replicate my own drawings after drawing them once...Also I hate you, when you say drawing since 2nd of feb, do you mean all the time?or once every so often? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingleberrys Posted March 22, 2010 Author Share Posted March 22, 2010 @Pryex:> I have a distinct dislike of furries…> > Not the people who are furries, the human animal hybrid things...> > EEEWWWW.> > Also, I wish I could replicate my own drawings after drawing them once...> > Also I hate you, when you say drawing since 2nd of feb, do you mean all the time?> > or once every so often?lol no need to hate me T_T i draw for 5 hours a day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 Would you wanna work on a series? friends of mine wrote a story that were were gonna turn into a comic but never got around to drawing it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHADERS Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 omaigodits furries :Di <3 furries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadoweight Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 Shaders is a furrie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingleberrys Posted March 23, 2010 Author Share Posted March 23, 2010 @IceCream:> Would you wanna work on a series? friends of mine wrote a story that were were gonna turn into a comic but never got around to drawing it out.depends on what the comic is about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niko Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 Good drawings but I wish they were colored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 @Urimas:> @IceCream:> > > Would you wanna work on a series? friends of mine wrote a story that were were gonna turn into a comic but never got around to drawing it out.> > depends on what the comic is aboutWell.. it started off as a lil joke where our friend Bill, runs into hot topic and kills all the vampire fags, which turned into us actually building a story and lore around it. also changing it back into a fantasy world hundreds of years ago.. with time paradox's included :DAlso.. Its called William Welsh : Vampire Hunter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 Very good, but I can barely see what's happening, color it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Homicidal Monkey Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 too many anthropomorphic animals for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pryex Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 @Urimas:> @Pryex:> > > I have a distinct dislike of furries…> > > > Not the people who are furries, the human animal hybrid things...> > > > EEEWWWW.> > > > Also, I wish I could replicate my own drawings after drawing them once...> > > > Also I hate you, when you say drawing since 2nd of feb, do you mean all the time?> > > > or once every so often?> > lol no need to hate me T_T i draw for 5 hours a dayPhew, that's alright then,I just need to practise a little more…a lot more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sputnak Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 That was very weird… but still AWESOME! the guy got his brains blown out. Disturbed by the late pages about why he did that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingleberrys Posted April 18, 2010 Author Share Posted April 18, 2010 yeah this is on hold till i finish a project for my sister Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 I've done a total of 70/100 pages for my comic. It's going to be finished at the end of this month. But it's too long to post.So meh.Anyway. I read the first page, and I noticed it was easy on the eyes. Action on the first frame is always good but you managed to start off on the first page at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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