DreadX13 Posted May 9, 2010 Author Share Posted May 9, 2010 good bad on the right track what you think?![](http://i788.photobucket.com/albums/yy166/SacredChaosOnline/Sacred%20Chaos%20Online/testwebsite.jpg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ispan Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Throw it out and start it again.Personally i hate it, its dark, and there are to many colors and what not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollicat Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 @NGHS:> Throw it out and start it again.> > Personally I hate it, its dark, and there are to many colors and what not.That's a bias. I think he wants a general opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icedmetal57 Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 The font should be more readable in the main section, after all that's where most of the reading and information will take place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0bbus Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Fix typos. It'll look much, much more professional if you can get rid of those spelling errors. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marsh Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Pretty cool unique site, the text is a tad hard to read though. I would personally keep the header scrap the background of everything else and make the menus stand out a little more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowchris Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 @DreadX13:> good bad on the right track what you think?> > ![](http://i788.photobucket.com/albums/yy166/SacredChaosOnline/Sacred%20Chaos%20Online/testwebsite.jpg)constructive criticism. Just because you don't like it don't mean he doesn't have to throw it out. Oh and about the site, I love it , I'm more oh a darkeNess type. But yarly , change the font so we can read it but keep the color and design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icedmetal57 Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 @b0bbus:> Fix typos. It'll look much, much more professional if you can get rid of those spelling errors. :DThat's actually a good point. For websites as well as in your game, you should try for perfect spelling, of course you'll probably miss a word here and there, but try to get perfect spelling, it'll look more professional. Personally, if I see spelling mistakes all over the place in screen shots or in a demo, I'll probably stop playing it, because the creator obviously didn't put the effort into spelling their words correctly, which is one of the simplest parts of the development.Also I agree on Marsh in making the text in the menus stand out more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Not reading the other replies..The pictures you used in my opinion are far to low resolution, and have slight blur to them. So I'd replace that.Second, the font may look cool, but its not something you want the main font to be. You want them to be something easily readable, like Arial.I did read about fixing grammatical and spelling Errors, for example. exspect is spelled expect, so before putting it up, run it through a spell checker, or write it out in MS Word, that'll fix it up for you.But overall. It's better then other websites I've seen here. so keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Screw around with the font and background colors until everything is perfectly readable.And don't use jpgs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreadX13 Posted May 9, 2010 Author Share Posted May 9, 2010 Thank you for all your comments i will make changes to it i whiped that up in 1-2 hrs of course i will work out the spelling errors and i agree a diff font would be better, about the pics just a lil editing i found them and poped em in no actual editing if u would like to se it first hand itswww.wix.com/DreadX/Sacred-Chaos-OnlineBut im going to bed now tomorrow ill make the changes again thanks all =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Change the song as well.. It goes terrible with the theme of the website. Not to mention just sounds bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 Did you do any of that by yourself, or was it all pulled out of a graphic bank? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreadX13 Posted May 9, 2010 Author Share Posted May 9, 2010 only text, text boxes and bg is from the site its a neat tool u can build with thier stuff add it your self and it also has an option to use c++ and source coding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinjiru Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 It looks pretty good, better than most that people post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreadX13 Posted May 9, 2010 Author Share Posted May 9, 2010 Big change to overall theme i made things stand out more changed the song edited the pictures and added more to the site. Better? obviousily still needs work xDwww.wix.com/DreadX/Sacred-Chaos-Onlinesrry if i am bothering anyone by asking what you guys think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollicat Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 @DreadX13:> Big change to overall theme I made things stand out more changed the song edited the pictures and added more to the site. Better? obviousily still needs work xD> www.wix.com/DreadX/Sacred-Chaos-Online> > srry if I am bothering anyone by asking what you guys thinkI like the song. Just do me a favor, and don't use Wix… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadoweight Posted May 9, 2010 Share Posted May 9, 2010 it looks awesome but is it ust cuz i like this kind of stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azkanan Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 It's far too busy - simplicity will do you the world of good.Tip: Always make sure text is easily readable. Rather than going for awesome and fancy looking fonts, use the simples such as Arial.I've just finished revamping my own website last night at 2am~ish. Check it out for ideas. _(It's more like a hub, actually…)_www.myworld.hostzi.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 Spelling errors, terrible choices in images and colours, unreadable busy fonts…. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 If you have a custom font, no one else will be able to see it unless they downloaded it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreadX13 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Share Posted May 11, 2010 the last few of you said what ppl allready said the pic is old now i need to update it the site was change for fonts and stuff like that ive been working on it since.www.wix.com/DreadX/Sacred-Chaos-Online Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now