VitinhooxD Posted September 24, 2010 Author Share Posted September 24, 2010 Hello all!Well I am remaking some old and boring tiles I had and I would like some opinions.I plan on making new trees grass tiles etc.Here is a pic.![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/0994eff1d1c88a239baff14c4645fd24.png)![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/dea3ca8f315367dba9d960fb32f28106.png)![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/67bf9ab96a395c7e43369d197fc535ae.png)>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/c484260bd99e061d25e95c6a0c7f08bb.png)What do you guys think?Thank you ,Vitin.Edit : Updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mulkaar Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 The trunk is too boring and straight give it more roots and more branches. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted September 24, 2010 Author Share Posted September 24, 2010 Thanks for the comment!I havent put many work on the trunk know im just finishing the leaves atm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 I like the bottom left bushel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted September 25, 2010 Author Share Posted September 25, 2010 Ty miguu.Any tips? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 Try darkening around the right side of the bushel I mentioned. Maybe make one slightly darker green for the very edge. I can sense a bit of pillow-shading. Try bringing your light source a bit higher and off to either side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted September 25, 2010 Author Share Posted September 25, 2010 Thanks miguu!I have updated the image . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 The middle leaf section doesn't seem to have a branch going towards it. Is it floating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted September 25, 2010 Author Share Posted September 25, 2010 No it shouldnt be floating ;D Im gonna make a branch going towards it ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 It looks a lot better. I like the direction you're going with the tree trunk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 stop abusing dithering or I will kill something you hold dear. Seriously, you're overusing it and its so very unnecessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted September 25, 2010 Author Share Posted September 25, 2010 I don't see anything wrong with dithering in my opinion. Thanks for the commenta tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yxxe Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 I really like the style. Can't wait to see how it turns out finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 top bushel is pillow shaded a bit. MAybe fix that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 @[Cake:> Vitin â„¢ link=topic=64894.msg695301#msg695301 date=1285441054]> I don't see anything wrong with dithering in my opinion.That is why you fail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted September 25, 2010 Author Share Posted September 25, 2010 @Lightning:> I really like the style. Can't wait to see how it turns out finished.Ty lightning!@Jeff:> top bushel is pillow shaded a bit. MAybe fix that?I'll fix that thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 I'm not sure if you guys noticed this but theres a HUGE BLANK SPOT on the tree… just messing around it looks good so far, can't wait for the finished product. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 Love the tree! It is a lot farther in progress than the original one you created!A few suggestions tho, the middle of the trunk (I suppose how it is supposed to be protruding out), should not be that high up the tree. I feel that, it should fade A LOT closer to the bottom of the tree. I like the effect though!You should divide up the tree a little more to look a little natural. As a tree's branches go higher, they are no where near as close to the density of the trunk. Try to thin out the higher branches.Over all though I LOVE IT! :azn:EDIT:at school so I had to draw it quickly, but the trunk should be a bit more like my example…maybe you could fine tune just your outline to get it a bit more real.![](http://i52.tinypic.com/jsjeol.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted September 29, 2010 Author Share Posted September 29, 2010 Thanks!I am gonna try to follow your tips but now im currently working on other pixels :DI have posted an test palm tree now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 palm tree looks really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icie Juicy Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 Nice progress on the tree, I'd like to see a little more work on the branches/roots to make it a little more realistic. I'm sure you're planning on working on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayloskien Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 just a thought but it might be cool to have some optional branches with stuff hanging from them,swings,people, fruit, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted October 2, 2010 Author Share Posted October 2, 2010 Thanks for all your suggestions!I have done a cliff , cause i was getting tired of the old ones!See the first post , and tell me what you people think! ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 2, 2010 Share Posted October 2, 2010 cliffs look sexy ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yxxe Posted October 2, 2010 Share Posted October 2, 2010 I like the cliffs, maybe you could tile it out a bit so we could see how it could look like on a map. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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