New tiles.

[VitinhooxD]

Hello all!Well I am remaking some old and boring tiles I had and I would like some opinions.I plan on making new trees grass tiles etc.

Here is a pic.

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What do you guys think?

Thank you ,
Vitin.
Edit : Updated.

[Mulkaar]

The trunk is too boring and straight give it more roots and more branches.

[VitinhooxD]

Thanks for the comment!I havent put many work on the trunk know im just finishing the leaves atm.

[mrmiguu]

I like the bottom left bushel.

[VitinhooxD]

Ty miguu.Any tips?

[mrmiguu]

Try darkening around the right side of the bushel I mentioned. Maybe make one slightly darker green for the very edge. I can sense a bit of pillow-shading. Try bringing your light source a bit higher and off to either side.

[VitinhooxD]

Thanks miguu!I have updated the image .

[Harris6310]

The middle leaf section doesn't seem to have a branch going towards it. Is it floating?

[VitinhooxD]

No it shouldnt be floating ;D Im gonna make a branch going towards it ASAP

[mrmiguu]

It looks a lot better. I like the direction you're going with the tree trunk.

[Chief]

stop abusing dithering or I will kill something you hold dear. Seriously, you're overusing it and its so very unnecessary.

[VitinhooxD]

I don't see anything wrong with dithering in my opinion. Thanks for the commenta tho

[Yxxe]

I really like the style. Can't wait to see how it turns out finished.

[Jeff]

top bushel is pillow shaded a bit.  MAybe fix that?

[Chief]

@[Cake:

> Vitin â„¢ link=topic=64894.msg695301#msg695301 date=1285441054]
> I don't see anything wrong with dithering in my opinion.

That is why you fail.

[VitinhooxD]

@Lightning:

> I really like the style. Can't wait to see how it turns out finished.

Ty lightning!
@Jeff:

> top bushel is pillow shaded a bit.  MAybe fix that?

I'll fix that thanks.

[luriok]

I'm not sure if you guys noticed this but theres a HUGE BLANK SPOT on the tree… just messing around it looks good so far, can't wait for the finished product.

[Guest]

Love the tree! It is a lot farther in progress than the original one you created!

A few suggestions tho, the middle of the trunk (I suppose how it is supposed to be protruding out), should not be that high up the tree. I feel that, it should fade A LOT closer to the bottom of the tree. I like the effect though!

You should divide up the tree a little more to look a little natural. As a tree's branches go higher, they are no where near as close to the density of the trunk. Try to thin out the higher branches.

Over all though I LOVE IT!  :azn:

EDIT:

at school so I had to draw it quickly, but the trunk should be a bit more like my example…maybe you could fine tune just your outline to get it a bit more real.


[VitinhooxD]

Thanks!I am gonna try to follow your tips but now im currently working on other pixels :D

I have posted an test palm tree now.

[Guest]

palm tree looks really good!

[Icie Juicy]

Nice progress on the tree, I'd like to see a little more work on the branches/roots to make it a little more realistic. I'm sure you're planning on working on that.

[Hayloskien]

just a thought but it might be cool to have some optional branches with stuff hanging from them,swings,people, fruit, etc.

[VitinhooxD]

Thanks for all your suggestions!I have done a cliff , cause i was getting tired of the old ones!
See the first post , and tell me what you people think! ;D

[Guest]

cliffs look sexy  ;D

[Yxxe]

I like the cliffs, maybe you could tile it out a bit so we could see how it could look like on a map.