Mr.LLoyd Posted August 21, 2012 Author Share Posted August 21, 2012 Okay so i'm trying to make a female sprite if you have any suggestions on how to improve it will be appreciate it.Here are the Male And Female Sprites:**Male**![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/a63949db0dd2d378b1051b92d2f2db7f.png)**Female**![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/2026a0e5310aaebc304b6c57a99e93e9.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DovahTech Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 Females arms look too buff for her body, otherwise their awesome! Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 21, 2012 Author Share Posted August 21, 2012 Thank you i will try to fix that now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zopto Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 wery nice just chage eyes they look wery sleepy ![:)](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/community/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.png) ![:)](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/community/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 21, 2012 Author Share Posted August 21, 2012 They are low on money can't affort to buy coffee. So here are the more skiny arms:![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/bca9ffe6342c5372219b629b207a6315.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zopto Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 hmm now resize a head…for me it look to big now.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synergy Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 I agree; the head needs to be a tiny bit smaller. ![:)](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/community/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 21, 2012 Author Share Posted August 21, 2012 I like to keep the heads big so it can have cortoony look since the game will be that kind of style. Also what do you mean the hight of the head? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 21, 2012 Author Share Posted August 21, 2012 Here is the sprite with some basic hair for example ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/7404e33175b8247f9211a82094f0478c.png)dont mind the hair i'm not good with hairs this is just to see if the head will look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 Hooves. They have hooves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 21, 2012 Author Share Posted August 21, 2012 Lolwut? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 Look at a goat's legs, then look at your sprite's legs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 21, 2012 Author Share Posted August 21, 2012 Yeah thats becouse i made the legs more skiny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lukin Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 The males face looks too girly imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 21, 2012 Author Share Posted August 21, 2012 Lol actualy they do kind of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vus Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 I like these, nice work anosora. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted August 22, 2012 Share Posted August 22, 2012 > Yeah thats becouse i made the legs more skiny.No. Both of the males and females have hooves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCADAMS Posted August 22, 2012 Share Posted August 22, 2012 Looks like they're wearing a lot of mascara. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dash Posted August 22, 2012 Share Posted August 22, 2012 ^ Yea…what's with the black eyelids? also the legs are shaped weird almost goat like like what Fuu said. Make them not curve inwards like that so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted August 22, 2012 Share Posted August 22, 2012 > Lolwut?He means like a satyr from Greek mythology: http://www.creativeuncut.com/gallery-16/rift-satyr-disruptor.htmlThat's what they look like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted August 22, 2012 Share Posted August 22, 2012 Lower the eyes down a pixel or increase them in size. Shrink the shoulders and widen those hips. Women have curves. Give her something to bear children with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 22, 2012 Author Share Posted August 22, 2012 Thank you for the suggestion guys i will see what i can do to improve them. And i will post the update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 22, 2012 Author Share Posted August 22, 2012 Okay this is the male sprite. Moved the eyes 1pixel down moved the eyebrows 2pixels down made the eyes a little lighter and changed the legs.![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/16242d483ea51f6e1c8614f698937806.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colonello Posted August 22, 2012 Share Posted August 22, 2012 I like it but they look like they're sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted August 22, 2012 Share Posted August 22, 2012 I agree with Phantom. I think moving the eyes down was a bad call on my part.Are they supposed to be looking down? I think that needs fixing instead. More or less like so:![](http://i46.tinypic.com/343kzlx.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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