hisherwin Posted November 10, 2012 Author Share Posted November 10, 2012 Well i was bored , And i think that i will show this screenshot too all of you..I guess i need to improve my pixel art.. But i will show more tomorrow or next saturday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 Not bad, but I find the road is too light. The buildings also seem over-saturated when compared to the trees/grass. And on the taller buildings the bricks dont tile properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnPony Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 Get rid of the colored buildings, the trees are nice though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marsh Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 Looks pretty good, maybe move there legs together. Look like there kneeling or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 Is the road supposed to be almost white? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 Buildings in a city don't look like that. Colors are way too bright. Ugly shading on the trees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wortel Angels Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 I like it ;-)@lttyBitties… why are you writing on every post shading bad bla bla bla... please do it better if you canPS. ive seen your sprites... (Too dark,,, too small not real looking no shading)Back to TopicThe street looks a bit weird to the other colors ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mhampster Posted November 11, 2012 Share Posted November 11, 2012 Um…, interesting building colors, really stand out. Too much...bright, mixed colors. Agree the trees are amazing but you need to re-design buildings and road. Try a darker road, or dirt/stone road. But really nice custom pixel art, and characters do look like there kneeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 ToDo on the Next Pixel:- Fixed the Building- Darken the Shade of every building- Add some Police Cars and Burning cars for real Biohazard Town- Add some Stoplights- Make only 2 Darker colors on Buildings- Add a Dress on Each Character - (The Tree and some Cars are already fixed/added , Check at the Soljah's mapping contest)- Add some City Details..(Appreciate your free work if you share it to me through PM (NOTE: must be your own work)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 > @lttyBitties… why are you writing on every post shading bad bla bla bla... please do it better if you can> > PS. ive seen your sprites... (Too dark,,, too small not real looking no shading)The points are valid, that's all that matters.That said, Fuu is one of the better pixel artists on this forum, his sprites are some of the best I've seen here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 > @lttyBitties… why are you writing on every post shading bad bla bla bla... please do it better if you can> > PS. ive seen your sprites... (Too dark,,, too small not real looking no shading)Because if I said it the way I wanted to, I would get warned.Me giving my opinion is what was asked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 Work on shading and don't use palettes that look like MSPaint's default. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wins Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 Maybe work on the size ratios a bit more, like the tree looks minuscule to the buildings. The character is also very small, there's just something that doesn't look correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRexion Posted November 14, 2012 Share Posted November 14, 2012 Everything is far too bright and hard on the eyes. Proportion needs a lot of work. And everything still looks very flat despite the shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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