moktavz Posted May 21, 2013 Author Share Posted May 21, 2013 Hello guys i just finish My new Artwork style, And i wondering what is your Opinion about this. If If this good enough i will use this Arteork for My game. So please Decide. Enjoy > Please leave a coment.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marsh Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 Looks decent enough, is there anyway to sharpen up all the outer edges? Looks fine but it just seems a bit blurry and my eye is drawn to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToshiroHayate Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 I think he's really lacking proper shading. Other than that, it's not bad at all. A lot better than I could do. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vortigem Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 Voted good. There is room for improvement, however your style shows great potential!Some tips:-What Marshy Dearest Dearest Dearest suggested.-Fix his empty hand, its difficult to identify what it's doing.-Add more definition with shading, as Toshi pointed out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moktavz Posted May 21, 2013 Author Share Posted May 21, 2013 Thaynk you so Much guys, Your coments are really helping me to create a better Artwork, I will keeppracticing on creating artwork.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToshiroHayate Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 > Thaynk you so Much guys, Your coments are really helping me to create a better Artwork, I will keeppracticing on creating artwork. No problem. That's what we're here for. And that's the spirit! Keep at it! Be sure to update us with any progress you make. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synergy Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 It's not great… I think you need to learn to draw smooth, curved lines for a start.Tell me, which is better, and which is most similar to your lines?:As has previously been stated, your shading needs work.Basically, it's a good concept and a nice style, but needs polishing and refining. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eltony Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 its not bad at all o.o. it could use plenty of improvements but other then that your doing good just try to even out the proportions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeno Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 Shows definite promise.That person has several light sources. If it helps, draw a little lightbulb or sun to help you get the direction of the shadows down. For example, the head seems lit from above-center, while the arms are lit from below, and the sword from the top left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMF Posted May 22, 2013 Share Posted May 22, 2013 big big tip,learn line thickness and line placement..as for the shading it needs work, but you get the image out just need to tight your style and im prove on those areas i said and you should make some nice characters.  good luck and keep improving. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted May 22, 2013 Share Posted May 22, 2013 > big big tip,learn line thickness and line placement..> > as for the shading it needs work, but you get the image out just need to tight your style and im prove on those areas i said and you should make some nice characters.  good luck and keep improving.And this is DMF not making any sense. But that's nothing new. What the exact duck do you mean by "line placement"? Because to me it sounds like generic liez that's not even supposed to make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Growlith1223 Posted May 22, 2013 Share Posted May 22, 2013 > And this is DMF not making any sense. But that's nothing new. What the exact duck do you mean by "line placement"? Because to me it sounds like generic liez that's not even supposed to make sense.He's trying to act like he knows what he is talkig about because he doesn't and doesn't want to admit it.On-topic: nice but like others said, it does need work. it looks like something that would go to a flash game right now lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendon77 Posted June 19, 2013 Share Posted June 19, 2013 You should keep your effort, i appreciate you and your pic is awesome, thanks MoktavZ for share photo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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