lizard Posted December 27, 2008 Author Share Posted December 27, 2008 These are my new charactersRate 1-10Do not steal these are not free.Thanks in advance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 5/10front view and back view is goodside views r very flat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devogen Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 @Ninja-Tech:> 5/10> front view and back view is good> side views r very flatYeah ditto, side on is way too flat, give him an a$$ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lizard Posted December 27, 2008 Author Share Posted December 27, 2008 heres the Chars moded a bitDo not take these are not freeRate 1-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 3/10 Look like Gingerbread Cookies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroFusion Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 there sorta flash when there looking left and right u can try making them a little fatter =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 If they weren't peach colored, I'd swear they were gingerbread men. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 they need bulkier chests. your chest sits out from the rest of the body, especially in side views. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonlord52 Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 The body on the walking ones look like you cut it in half and moved it upward…at least to me it does xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derek Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 On the side view, its a bit odd that his legs, torso, and head are all width egh? Look at yourself in the mirror. Build your sprite off of that. Thats what I did lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
haniyou Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 I think they got ran by a train. XDThey rly look like gingerbread cookies :POtherwise, ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 2, 2009 Share Posted January 2, 2009 Make his pecks not have a top chunk. Infact might as well take off the outline on his pecks except the bottom and just make them a bit brighter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted January 2, 2009 Share Posted January 2, 2009 @Ninja-Tech:> 5/10> front view and back view is good> side views r very flat@Devogen:> Yeah ditto, side on is way too flat, give him an a$$come on now give him a Buttand hes chest looks rly weird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 2, 2009 Share Posted January 2, 2009 His a$$ looks sorta odd on the back view too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khachaturian Posted January 2, 2009 Share Posted January 2, 2009 I don't think i'd want to steal these…Basically, waht everyones already said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted January 2, 2009 Share Posted January 2, 2009 @Lizard:> heres the Chars moded a bit> > Do not take these are not free> Rate 1-10the only thing is see modded is the stupid leaf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted January 2, 2009 Share Posted January 2, 2009 3/10Dont make the sides so flat, give them some fat.The eyes look like slits.I dont like your choice of colours (but,thats just me XD)I think you should consider changing the shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted January 2, 2009 Share Posted January 2, 2009 He should work on giving them bones first ;3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted January 2, 2009 Share Posted January 2, 2009 One more thing, why does he have boobs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted January 3, 2009 Share Posted January 3, 2009 Nah, he's a wanna be strong men, he's actually a fatass in a costume, and his men boobs are sorting out xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted January 3, 2009 Share Posted January 3, 2009 Rofl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Guys - I see you all are fucking blind. This is a blow up doll.(realy no offence for the author - just joking) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demon xxx x Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 I say you should redo them, and make them more outwards, instead of so stiff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chakkra Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 why in the world are they flat? have you ever seen a person that was flat from the side? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 I did. Seriously. But yeah it just neads some air in him. Pump it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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