FinalLife Posted October 10, 2009 Author Share Posted October 10, 2009 this is my second try of my sand village for my Naruto game took me a while… :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 I like. So. I'm guessing its made out of sand? Well, It looks damn good for a second try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalLife Posted October 10, 2009 Author Share Posted October 10, 2009 Did u see the first one i made i took The suggestions and stuff and made this took me a long time but i think its a bit too small or is it just me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xelander Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 …Your lieing, you HAVE to done more then 1 more time before, this is, amazingly for a second try in my small world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chakkra Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 @IceCake:> …> Your lieing, you HAVE to done more then 1 more time before, this is, amazingly for a second try in my small world.I made all my tiles in 1 or 2 tries.Anyways, this looks amazing! Keep it up and you could be really really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalLife Posted October 10, 2009 Author Share Posted October 10, 2009 Thanks And And it is my second try and im still learning i cant learn with out Crits :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chakkra Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 My only crit: Make more shading/texture in the middle. it's all just one color right now and it's kinda bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruins of Hell Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 The door has a small problem. It looks too wide and too short. Unless that's the style your going for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xelander Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 It's to rectangular, make it alittle more round.It's verry straight… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 I think it looks good, but as far as usuable graphics for a game it doesn't look very good. It's a weird size and shape; perhaps it could be used in an overworld style map with smaller scale places. But another problem with it as a game tile or sprite, is the shading is very smooth and deep; it might be hard to fit it with the rest of the game's graphics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 Very Narutoy (Yeah, I said it), I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalLife Posted October 10, 2009 Author Share Posted October 10, 2009 Thanks for all the crits and Support :p ima mork out the bugs on it like the door and after that ima make a konoha set :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeross Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 Hmm, the dithering isn't the best but it looks pretty cool, you would need to increase it's size a lot though if you ain't using it for a world map thingie.Regards, Xeross Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalLife Posted October 10, 2009 Author Share Posted October 10, 2009 @Xeross:> Hmm, the dithering isn't the best but it looks pretty cool, you would need to increase it's size a lot though if you ain't using it for a world map thingie.> > Regards, Xerossits just gunna be a building in the sandvillage :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 It's pillow shaded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 @Pete:> It's pillow shaded.Actually, it's dithered and very nicely made. If the sun source come from the south it'd be very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 @♥♠DDunit:> Actually, it's dithered and very nicely made. If the sun source come from the south it'd be very nice.What I meant is it's shaded straight on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 @Pete:> What I meant is it's shaded straight on.I can't think of a come-back for that, is it normal.Also, you lack shading around the windows… and your sprite must be very small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalLife Posted October 11, 2009 Author Share Posted October 11, 2009 i got a basic ideal for my Leafvillage building for the " please rat 1- 10 " Ill be gone for about 2-3 hours ill color it and stuff Bye :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 The leaf village looks good, and I don't mind that the sand village one is pillow-shaded I think it looks good anyway. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalLife Posted October 11, 2009 Author Share Posted October 11, 2009 @Wraith:> The leaf village looks good, and I don't mind that the sand village one is pillow-shaded I think it looks good anyway. ;)Thanks sadly i need help on making a base… if anyone can help please PM me on Msn or on The forumsMsn: [email protected] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demon xxx x Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 I like it, but make the light source come from above or the upper-left corner, but if it's a Desert Location, like somewhere that Gaara's from, I'd say make it from directly above, then make the shaded sand go higher. Other than I like it, fix the door, and shading, and you have yourself a 10/10 by most. o_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalLife Posted October 11, 2009 Author Share Posted October 11, 2009 Thanks ^^ i finished shading my outline of leafvillage : :azn: :azn: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magezhilo Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 It looks good, but the color kind of makes it too bright and happy. Maybe saturate it a bit. However, I shouldn't say anything else because it's not finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinalLife Posted October 11, 2009 Author Share Posted October 11, 2009 Lol yeah its no were close to finish i still gotta fix light and darken it more and make it more realistic like my sand. but can u rate it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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