guzmanm Posted May 21, 2010 Author Share Posted May 21, 2010 Well, as mentioned up there, I am working on a sprite temp for my game. So I would like to know what you guys think of it :D@v3:> ![](http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8843/gyzm.png)> [![](http://www.makeagif.com/media/5-24-2010/l63dPD.gif)](http://www.makeagif.com/l63dPD)Honestly,GuzmanM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted May 21, 2010 Share Posted May 21, 2010 Palette is nice, size of legs is spot on, however, the perspective is both questionable, and his 'stance' looks rather weird. His head is also disproportional to his body. And also, I would suggest increasing the distance in contrast between each shade higher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted May 21, 2010 Author Share Posted May 21, 2010 @Kreator:> Palette is nice, size of legs is spot on, however, the perspective is both questionable, and his 'stance' looks rather weird. His head is also disproportional to his body. And also, I would suggest increasing the distance in contrast between each shade higher.Thanks Kreator, I'll fix it right now. Looking foward a great fix before doing movement and stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted May 21, 2010 Author Share Posted May 21, 2010 **[Updated]**My opinion: v2 sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted May 21, 2010 Share Posted May 21, 2010 so far v1 is better, imo.I think his abdomen is too long, and his chest and shoulders look like a puny man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted May 23, 2010 Author Share Posted May 23, 2010 @Ghost:> so far v1 is better, imo.> > I think his abdomen is too long, and his chest and shoulders look like a puny man.Well, that what he should look like…:P.... not a "puny man" but at least rude, lmao...:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted May 24, 2010 Author Share Posted May 24, 2010 Bump*Update! Made down animation for v3! ;DMy opinion; I just need to fix the stand and it will be perfet ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 head should be more like![](http://i365.photobucket.com/albums/oo97/InsannoGames/myedit.png)thats how I think it should look but idkedit: my edit is on the left Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 @GuzmanM:> My opinion; I just need to fix the stand and it will be perfet ;DFar from. Both your leg and arm movement is totally off. We do not move our hands outward and inward from our sides when we walk, neither do we walk anything like that. His feet are tracing triangles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 @Kreator:> @GuzmanM:> > > My opinion; I just need to fix the stand and it will be perfet ;D> > Far from. Both your leg and arm movement is totally off. We do not move our hands outward and inward from our sides when we walk, neither do we walk anything like that. His feet are tracing triangles.maybe his sprite is power walking? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
balliztik1 Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 It looks like a dance of some sort. ;DBut, as Kreator pointed out, your movements are much too pronounced. Make them only a couple pixels or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 @Kreator:> @GuzmanM:> > > My opinion; I just need to fix the stand and it will be perfet ;D> > Far from. Both your leg and arm movement is totally off. We do not move our hands outward and inward from our sides when we walk, neither do we walk anything like that. His feet are tracing triangles.He's triforcing with his legs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted May 25, 2010 Share Posted May 25, 2010 my edit: original:![](http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6576/fixedwalk.gif)![](http://www.makeagif.com/media/5-24-2010/l63dPD.gif)still not perfect…but an improvement.tried to make as much changes as I could without changing your original frame too muchFixes on the idle frame:- added neck shadows- fixed pecs up a bit- I think I changed the legs a bit, can't remember- changed the feet a little bit.Fixes on the walking frames:- rotated torso and abdomen more. try walking, your torso/abdomen moves, not just your arms.~~- added more of a bobbing motion because we do bob up and down as we walk~~ (my bad forgot the original had bob)- tried fixing the legs up so they look like one leg is moving backwards more and one leg is coming forward more- fixed arms so they're not flailing as much.I still just don't like the legs in general. idk why.EDIT-I think the thing I don't like about the legs is the gap is just weird, and the hips.also, I think the arms are a tad too short. hands are supposed to come down to mid thigh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted May 25, 2010 Author Share Posted May 25, 2010 @Ghost:> my edit: original:> ![](http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6576/fixedwalk.gif)![](http://www.makeagif.com/media/5-24-2010/l63dPD.gif)> > still not perfect…but an improvement.> > tried to make as much changes as I could without changing your original frame too much> > Fixes on the idle frame:> - added neck shadows> - fixed pecs up a bit> - I think I changed the legs a bit, can't remember> - changed the feet a little bit.> > Fixes on the walking frames:> - rotated torso and abdomen more. try walking, your torso/abdomen moves, not just your arms.> - added more of a bobbing motion because we do bob up and down as we walk> - tried fixing the legs up so they look like one leg is moving backwards more and one leg is coming forward more> - fixed arms so they're not flailing as much.> > I still just don't like the legs in general. idk why.> > EDIT-> I think the thing I don't like about the legs is the gap is just weird, and the hips.> also, I think the arms are a tad too short. hands are supposed to come down to mid thigh.Very cool man! When I saw this, I realized that I suck…;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted May 25, 2010 Share Posted May 25, 2010 lol no you don't suck, you got the basics of pixeling down fairly well. it's the extra stuff that you gotta learn that will make your pixel art a lot better, like twisting the torso of sprites and whatnot.just learn by looking at other people sprites. that's how i improved my work. wayofthepixel.net is a great place to look. most of those people are amazing at pixel art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted May 25, 2010 Author Share Posted May 25, 2010 @Ghost:> lol no you don't suck, you got the basics of pixeling down fairly well. it's the extra stuff that you gotta learn that will make your pixel art a lot better, like twisting the torso of sprites and whatnot.> > just learn by looking at other people sprites. that's how I improved my work. wayofthepixel.net is a great place to look. most of those people are amazing at pixel art.Thanks alot man, really…:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted May 25, 2010 Share Posted May 25, 2010 Okay so no one acknowledge my head edit :((lol jk jkyeah I sukcuz I don't practicepractice makes perfectdo pixel art daily and you'll be fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted May 25, 2010 Share Posted May 25, 2010 haha. Ninja i actually like the edit you did to the head. I already told Guz on MSN it needed to be bigger to match the body. But even though i said this before. Nice Job man ;)-Irhymer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted May 25, 2010 Share Posted May 25, 2010 i just took the animation off the first post and fixed it up. didn't read the rest lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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