Toranos Posted March 12, 2011 Author Share Posted March 12, 2011 Just wanted some C&C on these trees i've done for Ambershire.![](http://www.ambershire.net/user/toranos/preview/TreePreview.png)>! ![](http://www.ambershire.net/user/toranos/preview/maps/map-preview1.jpg)Uhm. Took me about 30 minutes, Never really done trees before, but first time for everything.. ;D (Yeah I did the 'Old Trees" but they shouldn't be considered trees). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilbunnie Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 I really like it,here is my two cents though:The wooden part at the bottom, looks too 'perfect'. Maybe make the whole tree look sorta wonky or something.Try to make 3-4 other tree types because 4 of the exact same tree on one map is just crazy :)Other than that, love it, especially how it changes colour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toranos Posted March 12, 2011 Author Share Posted March 12, 2011 A quick 'tiled' preview map done in EO.![](http://www.ambershire.net/user/toranos/preview/TreeLivePreview.png)And thanks Captain, all noted. Will be doing different trees, just wanted this pretty much for tiling like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lukin Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 I love the simple style on the grass and path, even without detail you managed to make it look awesome, guess it's those small details every once in a while. :PAnd those trees are nice, but they seem puffy to me, not like it's leaves or branches, but I like it, makes it a bit different from other trees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lavos Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 The tree is really neat. Really looks good with that map and sprites too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 Just epic, really darn epic. As expected from you Toranos. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizzy Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 Really like this tree. Two thumbs up (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NnsNightshade Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 Tree itself looks pretty nice…with the current tileset not so much, only because that tree has insane dark shading and detail compared to the otherwise scarecely detailed and shaded other tiles. I'd lighten the very very darker shade on the trees, so that it may flow better together?But the tree itself looks very nice, in my opinion, though it does seem very stylized and not so much realistictree like, as someone has mentioned before me. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 @NnsNightshade:> Tree itself looks pretty nice…with the current tileset not so much, only because that tree has insane dark shading and detail compared to the otherwise scarecely detailed and shaded other tiles. I'd lighten the very very darker shade on the trees, so that it may flow better together?> > But the tree itself looks very nice, in my opinion, though it does seem very stylized and not so much realistictree like, as someone has mentioned before me. :3I think it goes well with the environment, especially with the soft sand and soft grass. If everything looks the same, it would be bland. So some variation would be nice. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NnsNightshade Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 It just looks as if itd be part of two different games is all, the colouring style. I like games with consistency, but if thats not what you're going for, then ignore my comment. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrKris Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 Looks good! I like the darker look, the old trees were way to bright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toranos Posted March 12, 2011 Author Share Posted March 12, 2011 An overall thanks all for the great feedback ;D@Lukin:> I love the simple style on the grass and path, even without detail you managed to make it look awesome, guess it's those small details every once in a while. :P> And those trees are nice, but they seem puffy to me, not like it's leaves or branches, but I like it, makes it a bit different from other trees.Yeah, as seen by the spritesheet, I'm going for 'puffy' and over-exaggerated, and that cartoon look. I also do agree about the small details, a small insert of them to stop any bland layout, and it's 'awesome' heh.@Lavos:> The tree is really neat. Really looks good with that map and sprites too.Well thanks!@Socuine:> Just epic, really darn epic. As expected from you Toranos. :]*Humbled*@Grizzy:> Really like this tree. Two thumbs up (:Thank you, I really like it too :P@NnsNightshade:> Tree itself looks pretty nice…with the current tileset not so much, only because that tree has insane dark shading and detail compared to the otherwise scarecely detailed and shaded other tiles. I'd lighten the very very darker shade on the trees, so that it may flow better together?> > But the tree itself looks very nice, in my opinion, though it does seem very stylized and not so much realistictree like, as someone has mentioned before me. :3I will try that out for sure, but the reason I have things 'insanely' shaded, such as the house and these trees, and probably more things, is to create the sort of 'contrast'. It is an attempt to balance the look, if you see the old trees map, the trees made the map sting your eyes with brightness, but these trees kill the over-brightness a lot. I will give your suggestion a shot though, and post the results. But thanks.@Socuine:> I think it goes well with the environment, especially with the soft sand and soft grass. If everything looks the same, it would be bland. So some variation would be nice. :3My thoughts exactly.@Kris:> Looks good! I like the darker look, the old trees were way to bright._Wayy_ too bright. xD Thanks Kris. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jumbofile Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 i love that tree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 the tree is extremely saturated. It would be great in some games, but in this game with all the nice bright graphics, it's bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceriux Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 looks nice, might want to alter the color of the grass to match it a little better, the contrast is far too much and it kinda hurts my eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shwamshwam1 Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 I think that tree looks really nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 well done, the tree looks really good, although as said above different types of trees, are needed to make a game stand out a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
6GreY6 Posted April 22, 2011 Share Posted April 22, 2011 That tree looks really nice ;Di never was good in pixel arting trees so any tree that isn't made by me will be awesome for me xDbut this looks sweet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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