Vortigem

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Needs more definition! I want to see it 'pop' out more.

It's an alpha build. No detail is necessary. Love the system you've got going DrAken.

Right on!

Personally I prefer the original eye size. Here's what I did for you though, touched up a few corners, shaded the side view torso so you could capture the definition a little more and separated the arm so that you could choose to position any way you wished. You don't have to use my example, its just what I came up with. [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#d51c255630abb60b7c0939cc92189d5f.png) Cheers.

The left side looks good, here is the difference: The right has no definition to correlate with the left. Give the side view a slight butt, a gradual belly, slightly thicker boot etc. Personally, I find that doing the "sideway" sprite from an angle helps embrace the natural figure.

Lol drat :) Looks good man, keep it rolling.

@DrAken: > If I turn this into an engine it _will_ be for Dawn of Light, but one of my many game projects. Fixed.

What? You're working on an engine specifically for Dawn of Light?

The room isn't logical; dresser isn't near the bed, the overhead light isn't near the table, the tree isn't near an entry way or window for photosynthesis, floor is too perfectly bland, and the house is just a single box. Why not have a separate/divided room?

Cool stuff man. I enjoy the atmosphere of those games.

There's a trap!

I chuckled

Keep it up long enough to receive feedback next time buddy.

I like it

Thanks ICT! I spoke with Marsh briefly several weeks ago about working on DoL again and I'm still debating whether or not i should change the name from Dawn of Light. I have something big planned for you guys soon, it just may take me a few more weeks to get things together with the time I have available.

No comments really necessary, I don't think you were around back when I was working on DoL actively. If you were familiar with the project you would possibly be able to pick out the evolution of the graphics the game has gone through. This was just a quick mock up after I began seperating/porting my more recent artwork to EOv2 saying "hey it's still around". My next post will probably be a video in order to really capture the art. There is a large amount of animation I put into each detail.

Right on man. You'll be seeing me around a bit more then. I picked some development up off and on over the last few years, ended up filling another binder/notebook up with lots of details and plans. Basically trying to summarize the image I have in my head for DoL. Lush forests w/the tall grass, overhanging vines, weather and so on.

@Kreator: > Well fuck, it's been years hasn't it Vortigem! Hope all goes well, I was curious what happened to Dawn of Light. Well shit, look at this. I wasn't sure if you were still around! The military has had me tied up for a while, but its looking like DoL is back in the picture for me. I plan on shelling out more paperdolls and finishing the other races over the next few weeks before I create a WIP and such. I'll be looking for a website developer by then.

Is back in progress with full paperdoll. Porting all of my old GFX to the new client began this weekend. 

Thanks Lilly

@Kreator: > Speaking of pirates, went to the lake today with my girl, and a mate. > >  > >  > >  > > Ended up getting really drunk, raiding picnics and barbecues, and getting fucked up by the children's playground equipment. Awesome.

I like where this is going. Keep the updates coming.

The smile caught me by surprise. Cool stuff :)

Maybe that's why we get along so well, you're my authority here and not the other way around ;) But I'm glad to hear all is well, I hope work the stress at work pays off.