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@Socuine: > CBA to read previous replies. :[ He was making a joke about how OP doesn't actually listen to our critique.

@Kusy: > Suck on a dick. > > I'm in. Hah, I just said that to motivate you because you never seem to do shit. This is now interesting.

Head is shaded in an interesting fashion. It appears the light source is coming from the ground, which is interesting enough on its own, but also it looks like the heads are perfect spheres.

@GodWar: > I prefer textures this looks like C64 :) > > http://www.cgtextures.com/ What?

@Sick: > Well, well. What have we here? A RP thread? Just the time for one! I've just bought Dungeons'n'Dragons and me a few friends will be trying it out. Also my RP experience doesn't go much beyond RPing in a few MMORPGs. I'm afraid that this thread isn't about that sort of RP. /shudders

You're far better than the majority of the forum. Hopefully chief will come battle you, I'd say he's the only active member with comparable skills to you.

the main screen is alright, though the black text below the login should be white. The register window uses an awful font and is too boring, its style also doesn't match with the main menu. The credits section looks quite ugly, too much bevel and too many textures.

Get rid of the gradient and it could be decent. I like the style, simplistic and retro.

@Aero-EBrown: > From the slight look I took at the source it doesn't look to bad right now. > > Thanks, > Aero/EBrown That's because Vaughan is perhaps the best C# coder to ever walk these forums, aside of course from stephan and perhaps soul(neither of which used C# to a major extent, but I'm sure both could use it very well.)

What the fuck am I reading

@‭‭‭Marsh: > >!  I'd like a NSFW tag on that. Didn't actually affect me but I was not expecting to see a guy's junk right now, and I doubt others will be.

Just google tutorials for whatever language you'll be using. It worked for me.

There's two problems here: Color and contrast. They kind of go together. Right now, the value of the text is too similar to the value of the background to be readable. Similarly, the colors don't go together.

@SilentKillzr: > Too bland, has an ugly feel to it. maybe some texture could be laid out behind the Menu options would help. Color scheme is okay though. fucking necropost. I'm not getting the ugly feel, though it could have more contrast. It wouldn't make sense for the sky to have texture, though maybe a cloud or two would make it better. Locking the topic now, sorry that you won't have chance to reply but I haven't worked on this game for a few months and don't plan on starting to again now.

My former statements still stand. The transparency will not change the fact that it needs to look good.

You changed 3 textures, added a few lines, added a picture, and changed the fonts. You didn't really change much. Critique on what you've done so far: use the same font throughout, and I'd recommend something simple but elegant like Times New Roman, Georgia, Palatino Linotype, something like that. The colors that 'gold' and 'ping' are in are pretty mediocre. The textures on the health/mana/exp bars is ugly, and the gray texture just looks silly. Use a better palette as well, black and brown aren't the greatest combo.

Newer tiles are downright awful. The old grass tiles at least had some character.

@SkyFox: > The problem with your work is that you focused on elegance and forgot about readability and simplicity. and then you went and made it trashy :( Try simpler stuff, make it look good in 2 colors, grayscale, etc. before adding all the effects if you really care about it.

make some sort of transition from the water to the sides of the lake, and vary the pattern of the water or take it out entirely depending on what style you're going for.

I'm digging the tiles. Anyways, why blitzbasic?

You're using slightly too many pebbles. Other than that, top notch. well done.

@DarkBeast: > Is it sold in the US Looks delicious.YUM yes

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Mack's RPGmaker 2000 tilesets and sprite.

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