Jimmy93 Posted August 23, 2012 Author Share Posted August 23, 2012 What u think i could improve on it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exception Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 There's a LOT of wasted space, and it is rather monotonous. Some colour, and some shrinking would be good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 Hey there.Well, the colors would look good on a website, but not on a game logic screen. The colors should describe some aspects of your game. Everything else looks pretty decent and since the logo is temporary, not going to comment on it. Basically, everything is pretty good but the colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 > There's a LOT of wasted space, and it is rather monotonous. Some colour, and some shrinking would be good!Wasted space says a lot more than used space. It is very important.The color part he has right, however. Give it more contrast. Make the text darker. Make the buttons darker.If that's your whole window, and there's no windows frame around it, then it needs a border of some sort. I often do a 1 pixel thick border of white then outside of that a 1 pixel border of a really dark color. Your X also looks weak, put it inside of a button.Why is there a snitch in the top left? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helpmeplz Posted August 24, 2012 Share Posted August 24, 2012 That login screen would be a **huge** turn off…give it some character. Colors would be nice too. More importantly you need to make sure it represents your game well and would make your players want to log in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colonello Posted August 24, 2012 Share Posted August 24, 2012 Looks nice but I'd suggest adding more color or maybe some cool semi transparent pictures of characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fogger Posted August 24, 2012 Share Posted August 24, 2012 You have a good outline of where things are. Now take everyones suggestion and add some life into that menu. Grey is a very dull color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy93 Posted August 24, 2012 Author Share Posted August 24, 2012 I'll try add some "life/colors" to the screen and see what it looks like Thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jane Posted August 24, 2012 Share Posted August 24, 2012 its kind of too basic for my feelings. add more detail and more clolors its boring only grey.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy93 Posted September 7, 2012 Author Share Posted September 7, 2012 Updated main post  new image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 7, 2012 Share Posted September 7, 2012 I'd suggest making the buttons darker and possibly putting down the opacity. Also make them smaller (width-wise) and get rid of that drop shadow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy93 Posted September 7, 2012 Author Share Posted September 7, 2012 Alright, thanks  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted September 10, 2012 Share Posted September 10, 2012 Actually,the horizontal linear flare is pretty sexy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted September 11, 2012 Share Posted September 11, 2012 Text should have 1 px padding in between lines. Also, use a lorem ipsum generator instead of the same thing over and over again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted September 11, 2012 Share Posted September 11, 2012 Just put padding in between each line. 1px is a little too small.Crowded text is somewhat hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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