hisherwin Posted September 23, 2012 Author Share Posted September 23, 2012 Rate it , And correct it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 Has no shading at all and btw make an 200X zommed one also Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sealbreaker Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 I don't think you would use a sprite of that size in any game besides some simulation-type ones (sim city… rolelrcoaster tycoon?  )Maybe try yourself on a bigger one (which will also allow you more space for being creative)-seal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 Long torsos and stubby legs don't mix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoalaHugs Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 Well I like it! Just do a bit of shading, but who am I too judge. I stink at spriting. .3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted September 24, 2012 Share Posted September 24, 2012 You queers are too fucking nice to people. If you sugar coat sht and say nothings wrong, how the fuck do you think people are going to improve? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted September 24, 2012 Share Posted September 24, 2012 > You queers are too ducking nice to people. If you sugar coat bum candy and say nothings wrong, how the duck do you think people are going to improve?Sugarcoating doesn't hurt. Usually, it's more effective. If you say "Looks good, but you would be even better if you did x" then they'll likely think you know something and follow your instruction. If you say something like "You ducking retard how did you even manage to duck that up? You need to do at least x in order to make it decent" then the person could either be hurt and give up, or think that you're just some asshole who says bum candy even when it's not true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 You don't call them retarded, you point out every flaw until they get it right. saying "wow thats so amazing just add shading and it'll be perfect" to this piece of art certainly isn't enough. I'm not saying you degrade them until they cry in a corner, I'm just saying don't say shit is good when it's not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnPony Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 > You queers are too ducking nice to people. If you sugar coat sht and say nothings wrong, how the duck do you think people are going to improve?You're a asshole, but i still love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 > You don't call them retarded, you point out every flaw until they get it right. saying "wow thats so amazing just add shading and it'll be perfect" to this piece of art certainly isn't enough. I'm not saying you degrade them until they cry in a corner, I'm just saying don't say bum candy is good when it's not.Who is this fagg and why he's doing my job? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted September 26, 2012 Author Share Posted September 26, 2012 Well i got a Improved one , I will re detailed it and add more Hairy And more.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fogger Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 > You queers are too ducking nice to people. If you sugar coat sht and say nothings wrong, how the duck do you think people are going to improve?Umm, nobody said nothing was wrong xDAnywho, as Nook pointed out the legs are kind of stubby in relation to the body make the legs longer.Also the black outline doesn't fit I would suggest a dark purple or something of the sort. The only shading going on are highlights which aren't even bright enough to stand out as so. Try something a bit bigger where you can add more detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted September 27, 2012 Author Share Posted September 27, 2012 Hey guys here is the Second Sprite Attempt , Well Rate it 1 - 10 Stars ..  And i'll make more sprite attempt  HahaUpdated the main post , Check it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted September 27, 2012 Share Posted September 27, 2012 New sprite is a big improvement, especially with the hair/clothes. Keep learning and practicing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted September 28, 2012 Author Share Posted September 28, 2012 > New sprite is a big improvement, especially with the hair/clothes. Keep learning and practicing.Thanks .. Do you see any error on that sprite? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted September 28, 2012 Share Posted September 28, 2012 > Thanks .. Do you see any error on that sprite?Try working on adding some different shades of colors. Perhaps both a highlight and a shadow. The sprite particularly needs work shown when it's naked, as there is no definition or detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeffrit x Posted September 28, 2012 Share Posted September 28, 2012 Reminds me of Link from Zelda - A Link to the Past Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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