mrmiguu Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 Wow! I finally made it to the big city guys! woot~Please rate 1/10 thru 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxArchAngelxX Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 hew man looks good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roujo Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 Nice GFX! ^^Wow. Something just struck me. Your doing a platformer with _Eclipse???_My opinion of you just went _WAY_ up! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 @The:> Nice GFX! ^^> > Wow. Something just struck me. Your doing a platformer with _Eclipse???_> > My opinion of you just went _WAY_ up! =)Oh wow, thanks. By the way if you have any comments to make on the GFX, please do so because I need all the help I can get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxArchAngelxX Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 ok comment… this will sound stupid but being able to look right through the houses makes them look too flat... but i have no ideas on how to fix it so my comment is to leave it as is (waist of post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 @ > ok comment… this will sound stupid but being able to look right through the houses makes them look too flat... but i have no ideas on how to fix it so my comment is to leave it as is (waist of post)No, no. I see what you mean. I'll make the windows have a pane, thanks for the comment ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxArchAngelxX Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 no problem, just lucky you understood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roujo Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 About the windows, that's exactly what I was about to say. XDOther than that, I looks great. Keep up the good work, I'll keep an eye on your project! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxArchAngelxX Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 i agree with roujo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 @The:> About the windows, that's exactly what I was about to say. XD> > Other than that, I looks great. Keep up the good work, I'll keep an eye on your project! ^^I plan on having an Open Alpha Test soon [don't count on it though ;)] So do keep a look out ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 -Windows are quite small compared to doors.-Buildings and trees are quite small compared to the character (but I can understand if it's that way intentionally).-The upper level is just hanging in the air - I would add something in the background there making it some kind of a tunel (the area under it).-Maybee adding some details to the lower part? Adding some pipes, sewers exits in the area where players can't reach just for filling the gray space. Also it would look cool if there would be some pipes comming from the lower part of the map on the fringle so players would have the impression there are objects between playable area and the screan. You could do that with lanterns, trees, bushes and stuff like that.-Also adding some detail to the buildings would be great.-If you are living in a city - look thru your window. There are tons of things you see on the streats but you don't even notice them - like trash cans, streat ligts, kiosks, billboards, advertisements and other stuff like that. They are totaly unimportant but when you place them it feels more like a city.Overall - nice work.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 Well actually thoes trees are meant to be like tall bushes, I'm going to have my GFX artist (wherever he may be) make bigger trees and such, maybe amp my GFX or I can try to do it myself as practice. Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 They just look like lolipops xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roujo Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 About the freestanding second level: That's the whole classy look of platformers! ^^About the "add more details to the lower section" part: That's a good idea, though. More details would fill the otherwise disturbing void. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 Okay, I added something else to fill the enviroment as well as some real trees. check it out… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roujo Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 Still, the lower section below the grass seems a bit empty… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxArchAngelxX Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 looks good (like the cat but it seems a bit rounded…) still the same window problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 @ > looks good (like the cat but it seems a bit rounded…) still the same window problemUm thats so you can see the player, thats the elevator system. Heres the buildings with the window fix as well as I fixed some pillow shading and added a fence (I plan on fixing the base tile's later) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxArchAngelxX Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 looking good, the elevator thing makes sence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 Really nice graphics, but to me… it just doesn't give me that big city feeling. It seems more like a town where noobies start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyr Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 its an original GFX style, but its pretty nice.the only thing that comes over "weird" to me is the sprite size compared to a house… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenton Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 The bottom of the cliffs look like nature mad them (spikey). Shouldn't they be straight edges so there man made? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 @Gh0st:> Really nice graphics, but to me… it just doesn't give me that big city feeling. It seems more like a town where noobies start.Yea it is… I plan on making skyscrapers for the real cities, but this is the starter town. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demon xxx x Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 I would say, probably, get a light source.. it looks like the lighti s coming from my face.. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
softbagel14 Posted January 7, 2009 Share Posted January 7, 2009 Much improved!!!I really like the fences and LOVE the brick walkway.Heres some of my suggestions:(sorry if I repeat someone elses!)-Bushes-Trashcans (or recycling bins! Go GREEN!)-Houses all different colors-Benches (people can sit or climb on them?)-Make a shopping place next to the area with houses-Gates for the fences-Some birds on the fences perhaps? or squirells-Allow players to go into the buildings (I always love doing that even if it is pointless)-Make more use of the upper level. Make those houses have more stories.-Dog house next to one of the houses-street signs-Garages for some-Chimneys (with smoke?)-fruit in trees-Bird nests…................. I could keep going if you'd like?lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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