Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 Heres my King for my game. I've still to do afew touch ups to him, so let me know what u think.Contructive critisim please, If you have none then dont post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 Red face, more red lips O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 Did you draw that? because it looks a lot like RMXP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 @♥♠DD:> Red face, more red lips O.oThe face isn't red and if I make the lips more prodominent it doesn't look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Harris:> Did you draw that? because it looks a lot like RMXP.I have no idea what RMXP is, The hair and cape are copied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 Look, that sprite is horrible.You copied a RPG maker sprite and drew horribly plain colors over it…And the face is red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 @♥♠DD:> Look, that sprite is horrible.> You copied a RPG maker sprite and drew horribly plain colors over it…> > And the face is red.The face is pink Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Tomo:> The face is pinkBut it LOOKS red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Harris:> But it LOOKS red.So why not say that in the first place? It would have been more constructive to say… The face looks a bit red to me, rather than saying Red Face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 I never said Red Face Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azkanan Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 LOL. Harris, stop being mean.Also, the face does look like he has bright red lipstick, granny-style. I make my sprites without lips, try that. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Harris:> I never said Red FaceIt wasn't directed at you, I should have been a little more clearer with the fact that saying the face looks red is more contructive to saying red face or stating that the face is red when it is infact pinkish.does it still look to red? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Azkanan:> LOL. Harris, stop being mean.> > Also, the face does look like he has bright red lipstick, granny-style. I make my sprites without lips, try that. :)I originally never had lips, but ingame the face looked to plain. I gave him the lips and ingame it looks quite good to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 If you copied the hair and cape you didnt make it.Also the hair sucks. The lighting shape is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Hippoman:> If you copied the hair and cape you didnt make it.> Also the hair sucks. The lighting shape is bad.If your going to leave a reply please keep retarded statments like IT SUCKS for someone elses post as I've asked before if you aint going to say something contructive don't bloody post here.Also what do you mean the lighting shpe is bad could you be a wee bit more specific. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zearth Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Azkanan:> LOL. Harris, stop being mean.> > Also, the face does look like he has bright red lipstick, granny-style. I make my sprites without lips, try that. :)i agree, looks like an old ladyother than that, try to make one from scratch and you will get much more positive feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 Don't do lips. Just do a line as the mouth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Tomo:> If your going to leave a reply please keep retarded statments like IT SUCKS for someone elses post as I've asked before if you aint going to say something contructive don't bloody post here.> > Also what do you mean the lighting shpe is bad could you be a wee bit more specific.It was constructive. It was full of constructed letters into words into sentences into a paragraph, into my post.Besides that, its sumthing about that hair…the white to silver i jsut dont like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Share Posted July 22, 2009 @Hippoman:> It was constructive. It was full of constructed letters into words into sentences into a paragraph, into my post.Great another 12 year old kid trolling the forum, leaving silly statements. Stop replying in my thread with crap like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ridrik Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 yeah it looks like a default or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Bob Firefarter Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 8/10.HOLY CRAP!!!!A 10 MINUTE NECROPOST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :sad: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 @Tomo:> Great another 12 year old kid trolling the forum, leaving silly statements. Stop replying in my thread with crap like this.14.Also im not trolling, or flaming you, or doing anyhting against you. I simply added some humor before answering your question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 @Hippoman:> 14.> Also im not trolling, or flaming you, or doing anyhting against you. I simply added some humor before answering your question.You said you were 47 before this! But I worked it out… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowwulf Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 Try putting white or grey in the corners of the mouth… then it will look more like the mouth is open or something... rather than gient red/pink lips...It does look very copied form the stock sprites that are provided with Eclipse pre SE, which are RMXP and basically illegal to use... dont debate it.. accept it.If you said check "my edit out" then i would say pretty cool... but if its supposed to be original... i would have to say its a fail in the originality department, sorry :(Like the RMXP sprites, he looks like he is squatting when walking... and has the improper frame movement.I wont touch on the hair or cape since you already stated you copied them.uh... 5/10 based on originality and appearance.It would be a decent add to an already overused collection for RMXP users. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted July 23, 2009 Share Posted July 23, 2009 @Tomo:> Great another 12 year old kid trolling the forum, leaving silly statements. Stop replying in my thread with crap like this.He's not flaming, if anyone is flaming here; it's you. YOu're flame baiting and flaming at the same freakin' time. Now take a chill pill, take in consideration that adding a few pixels over a sprite won't make it super awesome.I made this one in 5 minutes using charas, it looks kinda good and you can edit it easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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