defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 im trying out some black and white tiles and i want you to criticize my map. constructive crits only pleasemap 1map 2:i messed up on this one, i know… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digibattle Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 looks ok, at the bit where it goes up onto another platform you could maybe put some stairs there to make it look better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Too drunk to point out whats wrong with each individual thing I circled.What type of cave has weird deformed stuff like this anyway. Add more detail and make it look more real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 @Kreator:> Too drunk to point out whats wrong with each individual thing I circled.> > What type of cave has weird deformed stuff like this anyway. Add more detail and make it look more real.> > lol, no im not drunk and thaost are supposed 2 be rolling hills :huh:i posted another screen shot tooalso, i did these in like 5 mins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 @defendersdef:> lol, no im not drunkNo I think I amAlso I swear your trying to take advantage of me here, that next map is full of soooo many errors and the water is a completely differentt style looks like resized 16x16\. Don't mix tilesets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Oh shit I missed an error or twoEDIT- Actually I can see 4 I missed… maybe more if I keep looking(just pretend theres more red circles on there) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 oh god!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 @defendersdef:> oh god!!!You can call me Kreator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 @Kreator:> @defendersdef:> > > oh god!!!> > You can call me Kreatorthat sould be a siggy…but still so many errors? lol.. and the tiles on the water like that, was a accendent...usin my laptop do do it and it drug whil i clicked save...didnt know that until now...also, this is my 400th post, yay me, :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 @defendersdef:> @Kreator:> > > @defendersdef:> > > > > oh god!!!> > > > You can call me Kreator> > that sould be a siggy…> > but still so many errors? lol.. and the tiles on the water like that, was a accendent...> > usin my laptop do do it and it drug whil i clicked save...> > didnt know that until now...> > also, this is my 400th post, yay me, :DGood use it I like being in peoples signatures lmao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 ok, you can use mine about the photobucket lol XD XDand also, im fixing my maps. i will post more on top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azkanan Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Also, did you desaturate this, or use the channel mixer –> Monochrome? Desaturate is the fail choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 @Azkanan:> Also, did you desaturate this, or use the channel mixer –> Monochrome? Desaturate is the fail choice.simple english please… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Did you make it black and white by using a program to remove all the color saturation, or change the channel to monochrome? If you removed the saturation using something like photoshops hue/saturation feature, then you fail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 i used paint.net and clicked black and white… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ark0n Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 1: 4/10New 2: 8/10Good job on the new second one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 @l-l@140:> 1: 4/10> New 2: 8/10> Good job on the new second onety, im trying to get it 10/10 for kreators standards.*walking into hell* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dthen Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Hmm… Here's what I can see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 ok, hows this. and sorry it took me so long, i went 2 mcdonalds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Still has a lot of errors, doesn't seem to have improved much.And you do realize that the greyscale maps look horrible? People usually like playing with color. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 @Kreator:> Still has a lot of errors, doesn't seem to have improved much.> > And you do realize that the greyscale maps look horrible? People usually like playing with color. xDi know.im trying to improve on how i map so that way i get better. so i did this cause its harder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yxxe Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 @defendersdef:> so i did this cause its harderI would say that it doesnt help that its harder. I would work my way up, making more complex maps as you go, otherwise you might find it too hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 @[HS:> Adrammelech link=topic=54727.msg579764#msg579764 date=1259431832]> @defendersdef:> > > so i did this cause its harder> > I would say that it doesnt help that its harder. I would work my way up, making more complex maps as you go, otherwise you might find it too hard.I Like challenges.beginners practice until they get it right.professionals practice until they cant get it wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kanechart Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Not bad don't let people down I thought it was cool having like a gray scale zone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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