Skell Posted January 29, 2010 Author Share Posted January 29, 2010 Hi, I have been working on a 3D Robot Project where I had to design my own robot from scratch, I've done sketches, concepts, poses and alot more, I've finally ready to present it to touchofdeathforums. I will still be working on improving a few things, I've already got an idea for a scene, sadly I can't find the mockup and I'll probably have to make it again.Finished Pictures:![](http://i309.photobucket.com/albums/kk393/xSkellx/Robot_Jonas_Ahm_Beauty.jpg)![](http://i309.photobucket.com/albums/kk393/xSkellx/Robot_Jonas_Ahm_Tech.jpg)![](http://i309.photobucket.com/albums/kk393/xSkellx/RobotPosing2-2.png)![](http://i309.photobucket.com/albums/kk393/xSkellx/Ahm_Robot_Concept.jpg)Process:![](http://i309.photobucket.com/albums/kk393/xSkellx/Robot_Ahm.jpg)![](http://i309.photobucket.com/albums/kk393/xSkellx/RobotPosing2-1.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HappyBoy Posted January 29, 2010 Share Posted January 29, 2010 can u explain what it's for?… I mean.. what does it do? or is it just the design?...it looks gud, that's what I have to give ya :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted January 29, 2010 Share Posted January 29, 2010 Oh hello thar jonas ahm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted January 29, 2010 Author Share Posted January 29, 2010 It is simply practice and art :)And hello there mcnugget :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted February 15, 2010 Author Share Posted February 15, 2010 Bump for viewers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHADERS Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 looks nothing like a robot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yorty Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 It looks plenty like a robot -.- …But I dont really like the textures. And I kind of likes the sketches more. The model seems... Flimsy. Sketches have a good bulky look to them. Maybe its just Watercolors(?). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted February 15, 2010 Author Share Posted February 15, 2010 @SHADERS:> looks nothing like a robotk, what does it look like for you then? :azn: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted February 15, 2010 Author Share Posted February 15, 2010 @Yorty.:> It looks plenty like a robot -.- …> But I dont really like the textures. And I kind of likes the sketches more. The model seems... Flimsy. Sketches have a good bulky look to them. Maybe its just Watercolors(?).I know what you mean, the textures are extremely bad, but it was more because of the deadline I was given at the time, I myself also think my sketches looks better and the final model need to look more like the sketches, I should have made the upper body bigger and maybe put the arms a little away from the body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keebler Elf Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 Thats a weird lookin arm. Thought it was a second robot for a bit there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yorty Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 @☺Skell:> @Yorty.:> > > It looks plenty like a robot -.- …> > But I dont really like the textures. And I kind of likes the sketches more. The model seems... Flimsy. Sketches have a good bulky look to them. Maybe its just Watercolors(?).> > I know what you mean, the textures are extremely bad, but it was more because of the deadline I was given at the time, I myself also think my sketches looks better and the final model need to look more like the sketches, I should have made the upper body bigger and maybe put the arms a little away from the body.Yeah, the body should be bigger for sure. Also, look at the legs… :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saadhamza Posted February 16, 2010 Share Posted February 16, 2010 thats pretty good.9/10 for starting. but theirs plenty of work. keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowchris Posted February 16, 2010 Share Posted February 16, 2010 @Yorty.:> It looks plenty like a robot -.- …> But I dont really like the textures. And I kind of likes the sketches more. The model seems... Flimsy. Sketches have a good bulky look to them. Maybe its just Watercolors(?).It look like a dog standing to me….. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted February 18, 2010 Author Share Posted February 18, 2010 @XxshadowAssasinXx:> @Yorty.:> > > It looks plenty like a robot -.- …> > But I dont really like the textures. And I kind of likes the sketches more. The model seems... Flimsy. Sketches have a good bulky look to them. Maybe its just Watercolors(?).> > It look like a dog standing to me…..You are not funny, I actually take everyones responses as serious critic, saying it looks like a dog standing is just directly provoking me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pryex Posted February 18, 2010 Share Posted February 18, 2010 nah, it looks pretty lame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted February 18, 2010 Author Share Posted February 18, 2010 @Dalek:> nah, it looks pretty lame.You are lame :azn: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pryex Posted February 18, 2010 Share Posted February 18, 2010 I'm gtiving an honest opinion, it doesn't look like a robot.it looks like a few shapes thrown together and given a retarded arm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted February 18, 2010 Author Share Posted February 18, 2010 @Dalek:> I'm gtiving an honest opinion, it doesn't look like a robot.> > it looks like a few shapes thrown together and given a retarded arm.Could you give me some useful critics to make it better then than just telling me that it doesn't look like a robot to you at all :huh:And I like the retarded arm and the few shapes as that is what I intended to create from the start, everything have to have shapes and some kind of arm, if you think it is retarded then that is fine, but I would like to know what that makes you think it is retarded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pryex Posted February 18, 2010 Share Posted February 18, 2010 Well, it seems completely out of place, the robot seems short and stumpy, deformed as if it's using that huge arm for support.It looks as if it would have to jump as it walked, like a guy on cruches.Maybe if you made the bulky arm the same as the small arm, or even just shorter, and a little less bulky.Also, it doesn't have any knees, that makes it a lot less believable, and mean, how does it walk with no knees, it clearly has feet?Finally, the texturing looks like a carpet.How many robots are mad eof carpet?Maybe if you made it looks as if it would plates of metal bolted together, that would be a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted February 18, 2010 Author Share Posted February 18, 2010 @Dalek:> Well, it seems completely out of place, the robot seems short and stumpy, deformed as if it's using that huge arm for support.> > It looks as if it would have to jump as it walked, like a guy on cruches.> > Maybe if you made the bulky arm the same as the small arm, or even just shorter, and a little less bulky.> > Also, it doesn't have any knees, that makes it a lot less believable, and mean, how does it walk with no knees, it clearly has feet?> > Finally, the texturing looks like a carpet.> > How many robots are mad eof carpet?> > Maybe if you made it looks as if it would plates of metal bolted together, that would be a lot better.Robots doesn't have to be logical to be robotic, ever watched the animation movie called Robots? This is how I designed my robot, even though it wouldn't work well practically moving, it is still designed to be a robot.And I've already said that the texture was rushed, but I didn't intend to make it to look like carpet… Not plates either.Regarding the big arm, I did it on purpose to make a gigantic arm as it should work as a bodyguard using the big arm as shield while having a weak looking arm work as an offensive weapon, the weak arm can only move in the Y-axis, but can grap and hold onto stuff, I wanted to make a specially designed gun for it too, but ended up not to because of the deadline. I also though a little on the movement even though the robot didn't need to move, I though of it to be a little gorilla like, but then the legs come in and making that will probably look weird, but since it was only designed to be as a render I leaved it as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted February 18, 2010 Share Posted February 18, 2010 Darien, robots will _all_ look lame in the future right now, because it's a different time period and style.Look at the 70's they'd see one day's mercedes benz and they'd laugh at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted February 19, 2010 Share Posted February 19, 2010 I must say that I don't like the desing of this robot. I must. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pryex Posted February 19, 2010 Share Posted February 19, 2010 Holy shit DD!Did you just call me by RP name?You're getting more immersed in these things than me… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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