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My plataform tiles


DshWinchester
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@Absolute:

> I like the shape, but you need to work on the shading.

Guess I will take a long to put more shading

@Jungletoeâ„¢:

> The hills need to have some grass overflowing on them so it looks like Kirby isn't walking on the hillside.

thanks.
![](http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/1143/feet2.jpg)![](http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/1251/feet1.jpg)

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I will show some different colors then wich one is beter

Original
![](http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/6152/toriginals.jpg)
Effect
![](http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7696/89628364.jpg)
Darker
![](http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3384/tdarker.jpg)

ps:my game isnt chibi
I will use that boy sprite
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  On the rocky tileset you need to fix up the tiles so it aligns properly and looks smooth when repeating. And, I think it looks better as the "Effect" option, however, two things take away from the tileset. The brownish panorama behind doesn't go with the grey rocky theme, and this is only speculation, but since you have jusy rock and stone in that tileset at this point, it looks more naked than anything and I'm sure will look better once you have more detail to add.
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Looking alright.

Few things I noticed in your last picture:

The grass transition from top grass tile to the lower grass on top of rock is very noticeable.

The small rock cliff, on right of image, has very defined edges between the tiles. Try making the rock/pebble shapes more consistent throughout the tile. It appears you have many small rocks bordering the edge of your tile. Which becomes very prominent line.

Try adding some detail to the bottom of the floating islands, maybe some dangling roots and making the base more dynamic, as opposed to flat (more so in the horizontal segment than the diagonal).

Quick Google image search to explain my last point about the base:

http://rhysrodgers.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/10/flying-island.jpg
http://www.portwallpaper.com/imgwal/floating-island.jpg
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