VitinhooxD Posted January 23, 2011 Author Share Posted January 23, 2011 I've been trying to remake some old houses I've made a long time ago to fit my newest tiles. I've been trying to make something basic for now .It is a very wip yet but here it goes :What's your guys opinions?Thanks ,Vitin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rithy58 Posted January 23, 2011 Share Posted January 23, 2011 Not bad. I think you need to work on the roof and the door.Sincerely,Rithy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 23, 2011 Author Share Posted January 23, 2011 @Rithy58:> Not bad. I think you need to work on the roof and the door.> > Sincerely,> RithyThanks.I actually haven't started the roof or the door i've just put a single color on then because i didnt want then to look white xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rithy58 Posted January 23, 2011 Share Posted January 23, 2011 Oh then it look great! I think maybe the wall could use a little bit of work but it still look fine, though.Sincerely,Rithy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 23, 2011 Author Share Posted January 23, 2011 Thanks a lot , and the wall is still a wip to xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andiii Posted January 23, 2011 Share Posted January 23, 2011 Looks great! Hope you update it later, so I can see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 23, 2011 Author Share Posted January 23, 2011 Just added the newest version to the main post.Thanks Andiii :DPS : Ignore the awkward shadow it was my first ever :3 , and it won't be in game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted January 23, 2011 Share Posted January 23, 2011 The shadow needs perspective, or it ruins the whole thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 23, 2011 Author Share Posted January 23, 2011 Hmm I'm actually not worried about the shadows since they won't be in game I just made then for fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
interloper Posted January 23, 2011 Share Posted January 23, 2011 nice but the roof looks too rectangular ( don't know if i spelled it right i copy pasted from google translator :P) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 23, 2011 Author Share Posted January 23, 2011 Thanks , I want the roofs too look rectangular since this is the most basic house in the game. There will be houses will different roofs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 23, 2011 Share Posted January 23, 2011 Perspective of the front of the house does not work with your view of the roof. If the house is meant to be "flat," I feel the back of the roof needs to be shorter.Also, work on the shading under the roof, so it does not look like a box. I don't know if your intentions were to make it have an overhang, or go with the old school "poke mart" roof,but if you are looking to make the roof look extended, you need to shade it a little more to give it depth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 23, 2011 Author Share Posted January 23, 2011 Thanks for the tips , I haven't actually started the roof tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 23, 2011 Share Posted January 23, 2011 ooo, aside from that though, the stone looks amazing! I really like the concept =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 24, 2011 Author Share Posted January 24, 2011 Just updated.I'm working on some variations to the house I'll post then as soon as they get finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted January 24, 2011 Share Posted January 24, 2011 I don't really understand how the roof perspective is supposed to look like… ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 24, 2011 Share Posted January 24, 2011 @Chief:> I don't really understand how the roof perspective is supposed to look like… ?yes me too i think you need to change the roof.But the rest is very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 24, 2011 Author Share Posted January 24, 2011 @Chief:> I don't really understand how the roof perspective is supposed to look like… ?Mind explain me how may I improve it?@Raiko:> yes me too I think you need to change the roof.But the rest is very good.Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted January 24, 2011 Share Posted January 24, 2011 Well… how is it supposed to look? Is it supposed to be flat, or are you going for the triangular roof, with perspective? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 24, 2011 Author Share Posted January 24, 2011 Triangular roof. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 I think the roof needs some work but the rest looks good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 looks side scroller. very nice for sidescroller though, if it is :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted January 28, 2011 Author Share Posted January 28, 2011 It's not :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 Nice, keep on working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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