Cooper.Jonathan Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 Hi i'm new to pixel art. And I would like to know what you all think of it. If you can't see it, its because your not signed in, because it is an attachment.Thank you, Jonathan CooperP.S. this is my first Pixel Arts & Feel free to put in your games without credits :D! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domino_ Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 Bread look's like chocolate… ^^But for first pixel art it's good. :)p.s. What did you use, paint or something else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 Apples look like cherries.Mess about more with the lineart.Next thing, colours are _okay_, but there needs to be more texture in it. You've tried shading, but not enough. It still looks very flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schnurman Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 Only a bit of shading, can make a big difference. Just a tip ;)I only put shadows on the cherry to show you what it could look like.![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/fa2d64c83543f06b7d5af29b898658d9.bmp)![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/2b418c516afd84db86452613d36deced.bmp)![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/a9188b29f9b191434edb8e3d5b5defea.bmp) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 For your very first pixel art, it's good. Though I have to agree, the bread does look like chocolate. Like Schnur said, use some shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooper.Jonathan Posted May 11, 2011 Author Share Posted May 11, 2011 @Domino_:> Bread look's like chocolate… ^^> But for first pixel art it's good. :)> p.s. What did you use, paint or something else?I used graphics gale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooper.Jonathan Posted May 11, 2011 Author Share Posted May 11, 2011 @Schnurman:> Only a bit of shading, can make a big difference. Just a tip ;)> I only put shadows on the cherry to show you what it could look like.> > ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/fa2d64c83543f06b7d5af29b898658d9.bmp)> ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/2b418c516afd84db86452613d36deced.bmp)> ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/a9188b29f9b191434edb8e3d5b5defea.bmp)Thanks!PS - Your signature does scare me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 @Schnurman:> ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/fa2d64c83543f06b7d5af29b898658d9.bmp)See attachment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domino_ Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 @Peteyyy:> See attachment.lol xDShadow can be even on top… that's ok.. everything is ok.. just wtf?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schnurman Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 @Peteyyy:> See attachment.the sun it pointing the other way…. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCADAMS Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 @Peteyyy:> See attachment.![](http://i.imgur.com/jsA89.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 @McAdams:> ![](http://i.imgur.com/jsA89.png)Look at the shading on the apple.See it now?Yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 @McAdams:> ![](http://i.imgur.com/jsA89.png)I lol'd. Look at how the apple's shadow is in the bottom left corner. Look at how the shiny part is in the top left. Looks like there's a reflection or something…. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schnurman Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 @Frosty:> I lol'd. Look at how the apple's shadow is in the bottom left corner. Look at how the shiny part is in the top left. Looks like there's a reflection or something….Whatever I did it in like 30 seconds xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dthnote801 Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 Why does the apple look like butt cheeks?And the Bread looks a lot like chocolate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schnurman Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 @Varethien:> Why does the apple look like butt cheeks?> > And the Bread looks a lot like chocolate.They look more like cherries. Also yes, it does look like chocolate…Oh yes also, are you happy that I actually put a bit of effort into it?![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/efe7aac461bb4b0b374f2aba72b5510e.bmp) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lukin Posted May 20, 2011 Share Posted May 20, 2011 Not really no.![](http://i377.photobucket.com/albums/oo216/LukinT1/Apples.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schnurman Posted May 20, 2011 Share Posted May 20, 2011 @Lukin:> Not really no.> ![](http://i377.photobucket.com/albums/oo216/LukinT1/Apples.png)Dude I ment in the shading like that, if I wanted to make it so high detailed I could have. It's his work. I was just editing it the same shading style -_- Its his first pixel for peets sake do you want me to give examples that detailed? No, start off basic then get more detailed… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carim123 Posted May 20, 2011 Share Posted May 20, 2011 @Schnurman:> Dude I ment in the shading like that, if I wanted to make it so high detailed I could have. It's his work. I was just editing it the same shading style -_-Stop being so techy >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schnurman Posted May 20, 2011 Share Posted May 20, 2011 @QWERTYUIoP:> Stop being so techy. >_>Techy? Why would I show him something that detailed for his first pixel??? He is just going to be like F this I cant do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carim123 Posted May 20, 2011 Share Posted May 20, 2011 @Schnurman:> Techy? Why would I show him something that detailed for his first pixel??? He is just going to be like F this I cant do it.Stop overreacting. You don't know him/her, I don't, Lukin doesn't. The best thing we can do is to show him/her the right way to do it, so they can try again, and actually start learning techniques, not sticking the way they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myron Posted May 20, 2011 Share Posted May 20, 2011 @Lukin:> ![](http://i377.photobucket.com/albums/oo216/LukinT1/Apples.png)These look nice and simple :)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lukin Posted May 20, 2011 Share Posted May 20, 2011 Because he should learn it the right way from the beginning, not start off doing things the wrong way and then find out how to do it the right way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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