Jacquelinett Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 You steal it, bro, you are going down.Anyway, here it is :DSince so many people said it need better shading, I added an extra outline, how does it look now?: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Needs a better outline. The shape is cute, but the shading needs improvement. The eyes are staring at nothing, it looks kinda creepy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 @♥:> Needs a better outline. The shape is cute, but the shading needs improvement. The eyes are staring at nothing, it looks kinda creepy.I love the shape :3by better outline, you mean better shading? And as for the eyes, how do i fix it? Cuz i think the eyes are fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byson Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Aww….Cute, they got bug eyes....I used to love the big, bug-eyed character styles.I'm assuming the tiny legs and arms were meant to be a design aspect. A little Shading never hurts of course and if you do decide to shade, you may find it better to make the characters outline a little prominent by making it darker.Otherwise....its pretty cute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Need more limbs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 UPdated with some outline. Havent draw anything new yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 HOPE YOU'RE NOT TRYING TO MAKE A GAME WITH THIS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 @SuperSake:> HOPE YOU'RE NOT TRYING TO MAKE A GAME WITH THISBUT MAKING GAME IS THE REASON THAT I DREW THESE SPRITE!!!! OF COURSE IM MAKING A GAME WITH THIS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Then add limbs! These sprites wont be able to animate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 @SuperSake:> Then add limbs! These sprites wont be able to animate!Excuse my english, what are limbs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Body parts. You have none. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 @SuperSake:> Body parts. You have none.What body part? Please be more specific Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 @Composer:> What body part? Please be more specificLimbs would be Arms and legs. Don't listen you can still animate something that small, it'll be much less noticeable though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Don't pillowshade it. Read some tutorials. Select a light source. When they said to have a better outline, they meant that you should outline it in a darker color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 Updated@Eckhart:> Don't pillowshade it. Read some tutorials. Select a light source. When they said to have a better outline, they meant that you should outline it in a darker colorpillowshade? what is that. And yes i did outline it with darker color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medleyy Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 They look like gingerbread men. Also, the front-facing walking animation just looks like they have fins that they're flapping back and forth alternately. The animations are also super-choppy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 @Aeri:> They look like gingerbread men. Also, the front-facing walking animation just looks like they have fins that they're flapping back and forth alternately. The animations are also super-choppy.choppy? :P Cool lol. I dont know what to say xD Well, hey, i like it xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Her0 Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 They aren't too bad, but the side view's need to be changed. When the arms are down by their side, the lines are too dark and it looks gross. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Let them 'bob' down a pixel when they step. We don't remain the same height when we humans spread our legs out a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 @Her0â„¢:> They aren't too bad, but the side view's need to be changed. When the arms are down by their side, the lines are too dark and it looks gross.To add onto this, you need to make the side perspective fatter. Right now he looks kind of… flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 The legs turn from fat to bones in the side walking animation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Her0 Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Just noticed, that side also has no legs or feet basically when standing still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 @Composer:> Since so many people said it need better shading, I added an extra outline*facepalm*Outlines are not shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickey Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 You can improve them alot the only thing I noticed (that hasn't been mentioned) is that you can't see the nose from the front. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 20, 2012 Author Share Posted February 20, 2012 @Kreator:> *facepalm*> > Outlines are not shading.how do i shade him then T.T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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