Fuu Posted June 10, 2012 Author Share Posted June 10, 2012 [![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/ceba5be5d3d4342058bd5094a28642bd.bmp)](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#ceba5be5d3d4342058bd5094a28642bd.bmp)~~Currently trying to make the sprite look cell-shaded, the one on the left is what I had before.~~Looks like this now.[![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/47d364077aab4e201a5ac2021398e05d.gif)](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#47d364077aab4e201a5ac2021398e05d.gif) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynxaria Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 Big head, tiny body, big ears. I like it! The quality is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vortigem Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 I chuckled Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 Ears are massive, especially on the one to the right. Give the ears some perspective and make the shaded region look more like the dark part of an ear instead of a semicircle. Also, the one on the right has teeny legs(and a teeny body, but I think that's intentional). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted June 11, 2012 Author Share Posted June 11, 2012 I wanted the ears to look like that. The Semi-Circle thing.I also wanted them to be "massive".Let me tell you, everything you're going to say is wrong was probably done intentionally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 @Fuu:> Let me tell you, everything you're going to say is wrong was probably done intentionally.Why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 @Eckhart:> Why?Choice on style.I'd say drop the ears a shade, right now the ears look like they are coming out of the face instead of behind it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted June 12, 2012 Author Share Posted June 12, 2012 [![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/ceba5be5d3d4342058bd5094a28642bd.bmp)](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#ceba5be5d3d4342058bd5094a28642bd.bmp)The eyebrows might be up too high.I'm also trying to make the shade harder, I'd like it to look Cell-Shaded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted June 12, 2012 Share Posted June 12, 2012 Actually looks a ton better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted June 12, 2012 Share Posted June 12, 2012 Way better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted June 14, 2012 Author Share Posted June 14, 2012 Eh, me and Gianni decided we both like platformers better.[![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/d8f321b0aaead54a021448cf4acf2bb5.bmp)](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#d8f321b0aaead54a021448cf4acf2bb5.bmp) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefroggy09 Posted June 14, 2012 Share Posted June 14, 2012 Looks fun loving! I very much like the style, it's bubbly! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted June 14, 2012 Share Posted June 14, 2012 girls' boobs are too high, they look like massive pecs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted June 14, 2012 Author Share Posted June 14, 2012 @Eckhart:> girls' boobs are too high, they look like massive pecs.Lol.Well, they don't really look too bad imo, but I'll move them and see how it looks.[![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/6fd319130d745f87001864b0cb1618a2.bmp)](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#6fd319130d745f87001864b0cb1618a2.bmp) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted June 14, 2012 Share Posted June 14, 2012 @SuperSake:> Lol.> > Well, they don't really look too bad imo, but I'll move them and see how it looks.> [![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/6fd319130d745f87001864b0cb1618a2.bmp)](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#6fd319130d745f87001864b0cb1618a2.bmp)Meh, I don't know if it looks better. Maybe it's just something to do with the shading or something. I guess since they'll be wearing clothes it won't be noticable.I'm not sure how I feel about the shading on the head, I can't quite tell where the light source is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted June 19, 2012 Author Share Posted June 19, 2012 WELP, I've been muted. But, before I went to sleep last night, I had a FANTASTICAL idea. It involves not actually using a platformer. (Gianni and I flipped a coin, because we weren't sure).[![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/47d364077aab4e201a5ac2021398e05d.gif)](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#47d364077aab4e201a5ac2021398e05d.gif) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slym Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 That's a buff baby. I don't think the detail on the body is really necessary–--feeling a bit creepy right now. But aside from that, your walk animation isn't really a walk animation. We lead with your knee when we walk. right now it looks like he is sliding on the ground. Your perspective is also a bit off on the sprite. The body looks much more fit for head on (what you see in platformers) view.Aside from all of that, your technique is nice and shading is done pretty well (don't know what's going on with the top of his head but it'll have hair so whatever). Nice work =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 Well I lead with my knee when I walk Slym, not his. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slym Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 That was a really confusing typo xD My bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted July 9, 2012 Author Share Posted July 9, 2012 @slym:> That's a buff baby.I'm not sure if this part was criticism or not, but I understand and will work on everything else you said.Also, the base has changed a bit since I was banned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 Looks like a rock. Did you made it gray due to it's rockis' look? Nah, kidding.I like the way it looks. The massive head and ears gives makes it unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted August 19, 2012 Author Share Posted August 19, 2012 Looks different. Don't feel like posting it, but maybe I will in a new topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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