Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 So i'm working on new tiles what do you guys think? Also thanks to Murdoc i have clif, tree, tree logs and a pot i will be adding more tiles soon. So here is a screen with a simple map.Also i will do some edits on the tree trunk and maybe make the tree a little bigger.**Old**>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/cefdc499c7048361e8df39d083f5a9c5.png)**New**>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/9ccd62bd74369089b40ec6aacc09a5d2.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vortigem Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 What happened to Elder Empire? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 It seems like 5-6 people max liked it so i cancel it also i didn't had any programmer to help me with stuff.But i still have all graphics and the 16x16 eclipse engine on my computer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyStudios Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 damm i love this style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vortigem Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 Shame.In any case, your new tiles are looking good, however the style seems like its still being developed. ie: the cliff vs tree trunk vs the giant jar/pot. They seem inconsistent with each other but its a step in the right direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 I don't know they look like they fit good to me i still have to edit the tree trunk to look better and thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 That's the spirit. Good job. I like them, the trunk however could use some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 Thank you yeah i will edit the trunk gonna give it a different shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCADAMS Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 Changing the tree trunk will make it look a lot better. Wouldn't kill if you had a couple of weeds or something to spray about the grass, too.Secrets of Grindea's style can give you an idea of what I mean.![](http://www.secretsofgrindea.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/2.jpg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 Yeah i'm just starting the tiles i'm gonna make a lot more and i'm editing the trunk atm gonna post a screen in 5mins or so.Update:Okay s i did the trees a bit taller edited the trunk also made a trunk with grass over it and added some weeds.>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/f33777ba5f9554b807beae713a9509de.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Likestodraw Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 Sorry, but the roots of the trees just look really… odd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 The trunk looks alot better than the old one, however, it still has a 'robotic' feel to it. Make it less choppy/squary and make it more natural. Also, make some grass pop-up around the roots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 I did but i guess i need to make the grass pop-up little more also any suggestions how i can improve the roots? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 Make it feel less robotic. Like I said, it's too choppy/squary. Try to give some natural elements, swift corners, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 Okay i will try. Also here is an update and a fix.**Update:**Added simple water tile and made the grass on the tree trunk to pop-up a but more:>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/583259e09e9cb74fcc7cd2ed8593a7df.png)**Fix:**And i fixed this:>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/103b345397b1e0fbcfcf7dceb0e2a3eb.png)**Update 2**I didn't like the clif for the water so i edited it a little:>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/71e2f5944a055d236cb11ce490d45c2c.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Likestodraw Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 The water is really square- like. It's not bad, but in a small body of water it really doesn't look very natural. The tree roots are still odd. Fix them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 I know this map is only to show the tiles i don't try to make it look natural.Also i havent change anything in the roots i changed only the grass on them.Update:Changed the tree roots a bit:>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/3120c7a81a073d66ddecbda1de773466.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 @Captain:> I know this map is only to show the tiles i don't try to make it look natural.Also i havent change anything in the roots i changed only the grass on them.> > Update:> Changed the tree roots a bit:> > >! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/3120c7a81a073d66ddecbda1de773466.png)the roots look better now.. the circular formations made them look too much like robot legs or something.. anyway nice job on the edits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 Thank you i actually edited only the shading but i will try to improve the shape too.**Update**Well i changed the shape of the roots a but does it look better now?>! ![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/c6f3841af917389d54d613f25fa7148c.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 The tree itself still looks like a mushroom. Maybe have some more width in your leafs, and increased height? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 @Socuine:> The tree itself still looks like a mushroom. Maybe have some more width in your leafs, and increased height?this tree looks like a mushroom![](http://hackedirl.files.wordpress.com/2011/12/epic-win-photos-mushroom-tree-win.jpg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 @Murdoc:> this tree looks like a mushroom> > ![](http://hackedirl.files.wordpress.com/2011/12/epic-win-photos-mushroom-tree-win.jpg)Indeed, it does appear to be one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 personally i think the tree leaves height in the original (lower) worked better with the perspective.. plus most trees dont have their leaves way up on the tree.. but thats just me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 @Murdoc:> this tree looks like a mushroom> > ![](http://hackedirl.files.wordpress.com/2011/12/epic-win-photos-mushroom-tree-win.jpg)It's also the product of human intervention. That doesn't occur naturally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Likestodraw Posted August 14, 2012 Share Posted August 14, 2012 It's not the shape, just the trunk and roots look… er-weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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