Techno 5.0 Posted August 7, 2008 Author Share Posted August 7, 2008 ive been writing poemsill just keep on posting poetry in this topic anyone else can as well dotn be afraid to write/post poetry. poetry is a type of writing from your heart.Why did I?im missin you right nowits hard to be me right nowsittin here in my roomdoin nothinbut fussincant stop thinkin bout you nowi can hear the your voiceyour divine voicejust wont leave my mindive been asked why do i like herwhy do i date heri reply without any hesitationbecause i love her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darknisss Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 Life without orgasms would be like a world without flowers :cheesy: TOP THAT SONNY, That was straight my second heart ;) renzo would know especially what that means Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 Poetry is usually more metaphorical and less direct..Instead of "sitting alone" try stuff like"Alone in the confines of my thought,The only one I can't escape.I hear your voice when nothing is said,Because I love you."That's more poetic, although it'd be better if it rhymed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elder-Bunny Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 Through the ashes of thoughts once thought, through the remains of remnants of what I once loved, through the lust, the passion, the beauty of it all - at the end of the road I look back and shed a tear for the time I've lost.: P freestyle b****es Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 Haha, I'm no good at imaginative writing. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darknisss Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 I want to freestyle :cheesy:I turn my head not knowing what is losttill i find myself and to what costi lose the innocence i once had beforeand i shed my skin and for this im poorYou make me lose the thought i hadyou made me think you were so sadyou went and changed the words todayand now everyone at school thinks im gay LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elder-Bunny Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 ^ did someone backstab you and tell a rumor about you? : F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Particle Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 @Darkniz-Panther:> I want to freestyle :cheesy:> > I turn my head not knowing what is lost> till i find myself and to what cost> i lose the innocence i once had before> and i shed my skin and for this im poor> > You make me lose the thought i had> you made me think you were so sad> you went and changed the words today> and now everyone at school thinks im gay LOLHAHA Punchline Poetry! The Best Kind there is. Soften them up with Sappy stuff and POW YOUR GAY! :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darknisss Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 lol first i was a little serious till i started laughing and so yeah… ;)life is like a summers day that just lost its flameand now that my wife is gone my penis feels the sameOh how I wish I knew where she wentShe didnt leave her cash but she left me with not even a centIm poor in my soul and poor in my walletI wish I could find her and if you do call itI will grab my gun and take the next plane to yanext thing you know im at the funeral singing halleluah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted August 7, 2008 Author Share Posted August 7, 2008 @Desiderium:> Poetry is usually more metaphorical and less direct..> > Instead of "sitting alone" try stuff like> > "Alone in the confines of my thought,> The only one I can't escape.> I hear your voice when nothing is said,> Because I love you."> > That's more poetic, although it'd be better if it rhymed.well i just started writing peotry and loved it so im writing more and more ill post another one later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 It helps if you capitalize where capitalization is needed, and you add apostrophes where apostrophes are needed. And what Desiderium said. It also sounds more poetic if you don't make your poetry seem so rudimentary and have it centered around modern day scenarios. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Refuge Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 There's no earthly way of knowingWhich direction we are goingThere's no knowing where we're rowingOr which way the river's flowingIs it raining?Is it snowing?Is a hurricane a-blowing?Not a speck of light is showingSo the danger must be growingAre the fires of hell a-glowing?Is the grisly reaper mowing?Yes, the danger must be growing'Cause the rowers keep on rowingAnd they're certainly not showingAny signs that they are slowing!~WW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darknisss Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 Run fast through the weedsRun fast through the forestRun fast through lifeYou dont even know usWe speed by without a waveWe speed by without a soundWe speed by through lifeYou dont see us come aroundWe are the kings of the mountainsWe are the kings of the seaWe are the kings of the skyAnd yet no one can seeYou dont see us cause you choose not toYou dont see us cause your afraidYou dont see us cause your blindWe are in your eyes, what else can be saidBacteria we are, bacteria we stayWe cling to your skin like the ocean and algaeThe forests are scared cause he have our teeth baredThe seas are turning cause were like oil burningThe mountains run high because they dont want to dieThe skys are whirlwinds afraid of their endGod has placed us here upon this EarthTo live and reproduce; to give birthWe will populate more and more everydayAnd we fear no more now the dinos are away…(Can you guess what famous race this is?)This is supposed to make sense...but to some it may not...100% freestyle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 Well… keep learning Ninja! : D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darknisss Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 lol im over here having fun making awkward poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khachaturian Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 the wind blows hardjust like yo momerm.restart.look up, see skyflowers flourish,throughout the nighti call them starsyou call them liesyou wished upon themthey gave you spitebut i hold them tightthroughout the nightwhen dawn comesthe sun'll make everything rightoh wheres the strugglewheres the fightwhat will i dowhen you leave my sightbut youll be gonewithout a tracewhats your name?oh moon, you are the girl without a faceand you told meyou didnt bitei wait for youby, and byi look at the timeit does not passit does not flyi can almost feel youyour shadows upon my eyesi can almost see youi must wait, there is still lighthowzat for a freestyle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 You know what's the problem with poetry those days? "Poets" and all those people writing write only about love and sadness… oh my gad I can't stand those sad poems."She doesn't love me - I'm so sad.She doesn't love me - I'll become a fag"Same about 90% of "rock" music lyrics... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darknisss Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 IT RAP TIME! Bone gimme a beat :PI said it onceI wont say it twiceYou cross my pathAnd I wont be niceI'll rip you to shredsand I'll take you downthey cant hear you screamcause i muffled the sound.lol uhhh…ok i blanked :cheesy: and in a freestyle ur not allowed to blank for to long or its not a freestyle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Kusy - Modern day poets are usually the 14/15 year old emo boy/girl who's boy/girlfriend just dumped them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 My name is diexie and I'm a fairyI do rape children but I'm not scaryI'm a good friend of the pedobearShe was 3? I didn't know - I swear! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darknisss Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 haha nice one Kusy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 I epic phail at poetry. The best I could do isHow do I write poetry?I can't find anything that rhymes with poetry!AHHH! I HATE POETRY!SCREW POETRY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Poetry, Poetry….It reminds me of Toiletrydoes that help hail? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Toilet Duck was a mighty animalBut it was eaten by a duck canibalIt's nowhere seen and my toilet is not cleanI'll kill myself or cut my earsOr maybee I'll clean it with my tears?My toilet makes me feel so sadMaybee I can clean it with help of my dad?My dad won't come just like the duckHe's surename is Norris and his name is ChuckMighty animall was that Toilet DuckThan you… thank you wery much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khachaturian Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 i hate poetryso cope with mei refuse to write anyi've read way too manythat make no sensepoetry's dumb… no offenseits almost a crimei'd rather eat my guinea pig,swallow 4 dimeswatch grays anatomy, ( its a show )i hate poetrygrrrit didnt work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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