RPG Mockup

[VitinhooxD]

Its been a while but I'm working on these tiles.I've just put together up some tiles and made a simple map , so here it goes , feel free to give me any advice.

New image :


Thanks!

[Vus]

I like them a lot! Very nice work! 

I think the second tree could use a bit more leaves, especially on the left though

[VitinhooxD]

> I like them a lot! Very nice work! 
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> I think the second tree could use a bit more leaves, especially on the left though

Thanks.

I haven't finished up the second tree yet thats why there arent many leaves.Think of it as a wip.I didnt sketch up all of the leaves part because I did that like 3am and I was reaaaaaallly tired:C

[Orbegon]

Well the tiles look good, not the trees. lol  :lol: Good work so far.

[VitinhooxD]

> Well the tiles look good, not the trees. lol  :lol: Good work so far.

Thanks.If you have any tips regarding improving the trees I'd love to hear.

Thanks for your comment.

[Vus]

> Thanks.
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> I haven't finished up the second tree yet thats why there arent many leaves.Think of it as a wip.I didnt sketch up all of the leaves part because I did that like 3am and I was reaaaaaallly tired:C

Ah, yea, I get that :) 

Good luck with your project

[VitinhooxD]

Thanks Vus, good luck for you too!

[Orbegon]

> Thanks.If you have any tips regarding improving the trees I'd love to hear.
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> Thanks for your comment.

The black outline around the leaves in the palm trees throw them off, the colors fit tho.

[azkanan]

The palm tree looks like it's been stepped on; it's too flat and you can see too much of the top of the leaves. It looks like I'm viewing the top of the tree from a bird's eye view, but I can see the trunk, too.

[VitinhooxD]

> The palm tree looks like it's been stepped on; it's too flat and you can see too much of the top of the leaves. It looks like I'm viewing the top of the tree from a bird's eye view, but I can see the trunk, too.

Got it , I'll get on that as soon as I'm done with the tree!Thanks for the tip!

Update on the tree!


[azkanan]

> Got it , I'll get on that as soon as I'm done with the tree!Thanks for the tip!
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> Update on the tree!
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> Much better, but, the trunk looks too flat now. We shouldn't be able to see so much of the branches under the boughs, and the sides could do with more depth of shading.

[VitinhooxD]

Yes I'm gonna remake the trunk soon

[VitinhooxD]

Sorry for double posting , I got a little update:


EDITZ:

Remaking stuff!


[hisherwin]

I like the palette and art but, the tree leaves doesn't fit D:

[VitinhooxD]

Major Bump , any criticism will be gladly accepted!


[Murdoc]

> Major Bump , any criticism will be gladly accepted!
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Looks great Major! I tried to find something to critique, but I can't. :)

[Zetasis]

Huge improvement from the first tiles posted. Keep it up, man, good work.

[Chief]


**1.** The roots, or part of the trunk that is going up, but seems to disappear around the back… not sure where it went. I think you need to have it continue around, and sort of wrap up the trunk.

**2.** The top of the cliffs and the base to not match, shape-wise. It somehow splays outwards at the bottom, creating a really weird perspective.

**3.** Because of the way your cliffs look (they look fine), it's a bit hard to understand that the ground above them, is actually above the rest of the ground. Try lightening up the ground up there to help signify the height difference.

[VitinhooxD]

That helped alot Chief , thanks I'm gonna try to fix it up now!

[Link]

I only have one bit of advice for the palm trees, generally when you think of palm trees you think of large leaves the look smooth and bend downward, the only thing about your palm trees is that the leaves seem to turn upward. Everything else is great, there's a huge amount of improvement from the first post though, great work.

[JohnPony]

> I only have one bit of advice for the palm trees, generally when you think of palm trees you think of large leaves the look smooth and bend downward, the only thing about your palm trees is that the leaves seem to turn upward. Everything else is great, there's a huge amount of improvement from the first post though, great work.

I live at the beach, and I can confirm that not all palm trees look like this.

[Link]

> I live at the beach, and I can confirm that not all palm trees look like this.

Your palm trees turn upwards too? Because the tip of his palm tree leaves look like they turn up a bit. I haven't seen any palm trees that do that before. Anyway, Major the actual owner of the topic, I'm just suggesting maybe you try multiple types of palm tree, I still think the graphic of the tree overall is good though so it doesn't matter either way.

[JohnPony]

> Your palm trees turn upwards too? Because the tip of his palm tree leaves look like they turn up a bit. I haven't seen any palm trees that do that before. Anyway, Major the actual owner of the topic, I'm just suggesting maybe you try multiple types of palm tree, I still think the graphic of the tree overall is good though so it doesn't matter either way.

I agree with Kid, a few different types of palm trees is probably the best path.

[Murdoc]

> Your palm trees turn upwards too? Because the tip of his palm tree leaves look like they turn up a bit.

lmao

[Link]

One thing I thought I should add, just for your benefit, maybe on the same tileset recreate the tree you use but make it slightly different, maybe a branch here and there or a birds nest or something like that, if you get what I mean? Just so that every tree on the map doesn't look the same and repeating, In my personal opinion I'd try to be diverse as possible when it comes to rpg games, if you study games like ff7 or Zenovia and such..they add as many details as possible to give the map a more realistic feel, they'll have the same looking trees, but the trees or such might have different details to give them an individual feel such as reality, not every game does this I guess, but it's still and rpg so it wouldn't be reality per say.

I hope I'm not giving bad advice, I just think it would help you more.