digibattle Posted August 21, 2009 Author Share Posted August 21, 2009 I thought i would make a little art gallery of my pixel work ive only been doing it for a week so no bad comments please i know whats wrong with it i dont need people to tell me thanks.Heres my first sprite i created its a bit weird :Di tried to make it better but it looks worse :OThen i just tried putting clothes on them lolAfter that i felt like making a crate but again its not that goodoh heres a more detailed version of that zombie thing you may not be able to see the diffrence :Dim drawing more now :Dplease comment (if you can something good plz)… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manbearpig Posted August 21, 2009 Share Posted August 21, 2009 Looks Nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gillispie Posted August 21, 2009 Share Posted August 21, 2009 looks good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antidote Posted August 21, 2009 Share Posted August 21, 2009 Looks mad. His arms look like little mushy things sticking awkwardly out of his body. He looks kinda…blotchy. Not bad, don't hear me wrong, I like the style, but get rid of a few colors in the sprite, fix the arms, and make his eyes not so angry, and it'll look a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 Fix the arms, dear god. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 As said.. fix the arms. but also fix the head. NO head is that shape. When finished with that.. shade it looks to be on a 45 degree angle down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 His arms are all scrunched up. He looks like some guy floating, make his arms at his side. His head is shaped weirdly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digibattle Posted August 22, 2009 Author Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thanks for the posts i will work on the arms and head then post another :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digibattle Posted August 22, 2009 Author Share Posted August 22, 2009 right ive fixed his arms and made some other sprites with dodgey arms lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digibattle Posted August 22, 2009 Author Share Posted August 22, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xelander Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 Don't need to bump after 2 hours…The head looks wierd, so does the arms, and eyes, otherwise i think it's allright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Oracle Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 now he looks like hes standing at attention. make his arms at a natural length off of him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alster Posted August 23, 2009 Share Posted August 23, 2009 Everything that I wanted to say has been said above.Also the first (and I think third) sprites don't look like they're holding their weapons - it looks like they've just been plonked their by some insane god. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digibattle Posted August 23, 2009 Author Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks for your comments im working on it now :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digibattle Posted August 29, 2009 Author Share Posted August 29, 2009 ive made a bad crate lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digibattle Posted August 29, 2009 Author Share Posted August 29, 2009 {updated}please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bongartist Posted August 30, 2009 Share Posted August 30, 2009 @[SB:> Æ’â„“Ñâ€Ã‘‚¢Ã½Ñâ€Ã‘ link=topic=50649.msg528827#msg528827 date=1250892402]> I thought i would make a little art gallery of my pixel work ive only been doing it for a week so no bad comments please i know whats wrong with it i dont need people to tell me thanks.> > Heres my first sprite i created its a bit weird :D> > > > i tried to make it better but it looks worse :O> > > > Then i just tried putting clothes on them lol> > > > After that i felt like making a crate but again its not that good> > > > oh heres a more detailed version of that zombie thing you may not be able to see the diffrence :D> > > > im drawing more now :D> > please comment (if you can something good plz)…A Good Effort! Keep Practicing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted August 30, 2009 Share Posted August 30, 2009 Crate looks just weird, like if you used noise to make it :\. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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