Check out mah rocket lawnchair

[lollicat]

I am practicing shading, tell me how it looks.

[renzo]

Like a poorly made stapler with flames shooting out of it.
The sprite is way too thing to be able to tell how your shading went.

[lollicat]

First of all. I don't see a stapler? o.O

Next, by rating my shading, I meant copying it, opening up MS Paint and taking a look. If you're too lazy to do so, don't bother posting.

[MCADAMS]

I think you did very well  :azn:

[lollicat]

Thank you :)

[spiro]

Nice job.

[magezhilo]

It looks like rocket ice skates if anything. I can see the lawnchair in there though.

[guzmanm]

I expected more of you Lolli, but its still pretty nice. Instead of making a rocket lawnchair, why not practicing shading with trees or building, or such. <3

[Zop]

Shading's pretty good actually.. The "Lawnchair" itself however… Needs some work XD

[renzo]

@Lollicat:

> Next, by rating my shading, I meant copying it, opening up MS Paint and taking a look. If you're too lazy to do so, don't bother posting.

If i need to zoom in to see the shading, what is the purpose?
everyone playing your game is not going to zoom in, why should i need to?

[Aldur]

@Renzo:

> @Lollicat:
>
> > Next, by rating my shading, I meant copying it, opening up MS Paint and taking a look. If you're too lazy to do so, don't bother posting.
>
> If I need to zoom in to see the shading, what is the purpose?
> everyone playing your game is not going to zoom in, why should I need to?

Exactly what I was thinking.

[lollicat]

@Wraith: I can see the ice skates, but thanks for the feedback.

@GuzmanM: This was done in only a few minutes, I'm sure you did expect more xD I will probably do something more significant though, I'll get started.

@SillyFace: I've never really drawn a lawn chair before xD

@Renzo: This isn't going into a game, it's more for working on shading and angles. I do agree, however since a lawn chair is so thin and small, it is nearly impossible to have notable shading.

[Skell]

Maybe you should try to refrain from posting things you make in a few minutes and try do something that takes a little more time for you to do, that way we will actually get exactly what you can do and it will be easier to judge what you need to work on.

[IceCream Tuesday]

Renzo is right on this aspect of shading. If you honestly can't see the shading.. why shade it? Try on a larger area. What I like to do is take other peoples line art, and shade that for practice. Takes you out of your comfort zone a bit.