Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 So, as I had stated, Valkyrie Online is going with custom graphics, and I've never pixeled before, so I hope this is good.?/10 please. Constructive Criticsm only. Thanks to TDog and Nick for the critiscm before posting. **Thank you, Kreator, for your small but needed fixes.**LineartKreators Lineart:Male Naked Sprite: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 Ehh, it's decent. The stance is really stiff, and the head seems to be a little too small. The nipples seem to be unnecessary >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 Flatface is flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 Yah, I agree on the stiff stance, but I kind of like it. It sort of gives the feeling hes tense and ready for a fight for whoever pisses him off. And a flat face? Whada u mean? Its not even shaded or given depth yet. I made the nipples just because it kind of looks good lol. I sort of agree with the head being small, but even going up one size makes it look out of place =X. Thanks guys, keep it coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 @DDunit:> Flatface is flat.That's because its only lineart faggot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 Thanks Kreator. Haha, I was going to say..how could it not be flat..lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 For a beginner it's good. Curious to see your attempt at shading it. Made a quick edit for no particular reason, if you like it better feel free to use it. It addresses a few small issues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 lol, Kreator, prepare to be criticized by me<3the arms are fat/weird-GuzmanMps.: ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 Thanks guys! Thanks so much Kreator! I appreciate it so much! Ill add you to credits right now. Thank you. Im not sure if this is good shading, or anything, but if I need to improve on something please tell me.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 @Lunar1LTK:> Thanks guys! Thanks so much Kreator! I appreciate it so much! Ill add you to credits right now. Thank you. Im not sure if this is good shading, or anything, but if I need to improve on something please tell me. I lol'd… very hard...That doesn't even have shading, it have only been colored .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 ..yes it has..what else should I add? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 ewww… its barely noticeable... and it's illegal to post .bmp's on this forums(Kreator's lineart on firt post) >:U Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 @GuzmanM:> lol, Kreator, prepare to be criticized by me<3> > the arms are fat/weird> > -GuzmanM> > ps.: ;DFuck off I didn't edit the arms barely. I assume it's the style he is going for. GTFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 Thanks Kreator, it was, and it was a great, small, yet needed edit. As for the barely noticable part, I dont what you are on, because me and my friend Troy defintly see it..I could be wrong, so get someone else in here, Im ready to improve on anything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 As for shading, your palette you've chosen has too little contrast between each shade, and you've also adapted a common 'newbie' style of shading called Pillow Shading. Pillow shading is where you shade from the outside in, as you've done. It's definitely frowned upon. I might show you a thing or two in a few minutes, although I'm about to head off for a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 Haha, well I am currently a newbie at this. Ill try not to pillow shade as much, if you show me a new technique. Any other shading I try looks like crap, besides this one, which is half-decent. Whats funny is, I was talking to my friend Nick, who also said to change the shading style, so no lies about the "frowned upon" haha. Atleast I got a good jumpstart. From here it cant get any worse. You should've saw my first lineart. Looked more like a deformed penis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 And no need to credit me for my mere edits. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 Well, I need to fill my credits page, and besides your a cool guy. Haha. Your going on the Credits wether you like it or not! Aha. Without you, my sprite would have a deformed neck, head, and feet. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 Fu**ck off don't credit me for a few edited pixels!** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 Ill beat yo ass, son. And you'll take it like a MAN. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chakkra Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 The sprite can use a few edits and the shading is horrid and barely noticeable. Make a new pallet.. I've taken the liberty to edit your pallet.Here is the outline with your pallet and my pallet side by side, respectively.Hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted July 28, 2010 Share Posted July 28, 2010 I'd recommend a darker shade as addition to your palette. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted July 28, 2010 Share Posted July 28, 2010 @Lunar1LTK:> Thanks guys! Thanks so much Kreator! I appreciate it so much! Ill add you to credits right now. Thank you. Im not sure if this is good shading, or anything, but if I need to improve on something please tell me. Face is still flat.Why does he have mascara on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Man03053ÃâžÂ Posted July 28, 2010 Author Share Posted July 28, 2010 Thats not the male sprite? and he doesnt have mascara…Ive also decided to put customs off for a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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