Wing Posted February 15, 2012 Author Share Posted February 15, 2012 Hey! In order to help me improve my art I am starting (more like restarting) my one drawing a week challenge.This Weeks![](http://i1270.photobucket.com/albums/jj616/eviltoastx/jayparkwip-1.png)![](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/105/1/5/taeyang_by_ohmynameislee-d4w90fj.png)![](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/106/6/2/top_big_bang_by_ohmynameislee-d4wg9u2.png)Older Art Work>! ![](http://i485.photobucket.com/albums/rr217/Kagonin/25-1.png)![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/cf21342426db04f5461e8c5b0351e27d.PNG)![](http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee434/Wingish/fin.png)![](http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/045/4/a/girl_line_art_by_ohmynameislee-d4pru1d.png)![](http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/338/9/2/line_art___walking_person__by_ohmynameislee-d4i65ir.png)![](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/041/8/7/first_drawing_in_awhile_by_ohmynameislee-d4pbmic.png)![](http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/333/7/2/line_art___custom_character_design_by_ohmynameislee-d4hpxfo.jpg)![](http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/335/d/8/random_character_design_by_ohmynameislee-d4hwbnt.jpg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duders Posted February 16, 2012 Share Posted February 16, 2012 Wow, it just looks so smooth. Very professional! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The New World Posted February 16, 2012 Share Posted February 16, 2012 I find some of the expressions to be odd, but the rest looks very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 16, 2012 Author Share Posted February 16, 2012 Yeah, I need to work on the expressions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted February 16, 2012 Share Posted February 16, 2012 @Duders:> Wow, it just looks so smooth. Very professional!Very professional about not having the slightest idea about proportions and human anatomy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 17, 2012 Author Share Posted February 17, 2012 @Kusy:> Very professional about not having the slightest idea about proportions and human anatomy?Anatomy is probably my biggest problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skillzalot Posted February 17, 2012 Share Posted February 17, 2012 Other then whats already been said about expressions i like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Her0 Posted February 17, 2012 Share Posted February 17, 2012 I like it, it looks really good. Reminds me of anime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 @[rose:> link=topic=78220.msg838805#msg838805 date=1329416486]> I find some of the expressions to be odd, but the rest looks very good.Agreed. God, it looks real awesome, man, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 19, 2012 Author Share Posted February 19, 2012 For this weeks drawing I'll attempt to improve expressions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 How were these done, exactly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 @ĆĀ¢Ć¢āĀ¢ĆĀ„:> For this weeks drawing I'll attempt to improve expressions.Great idea, work on expressions that you can do pretty decently, just because Rose told you so, and ignore the very basics of drawing like perspective that you just can't catch or proportions that will show every time you'll draw anything below the neck.Don't do the same thing every kid drawing wannabee manga does, nobody gives a duck that you can draw perfect anime eyes with reflexes and all that generic Asian stuff, if you can't put them on a face that doesn't look like a monkey's ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 19, 2012 Author Share Posted February 19, 2012 @Kusy:> Great idea, work on expressions that you can do pretty decently, just because Rose told you so, and ignore the very basics of drawing like perspective that you just can't catch or proportions that will show every time you'll draw anything below the neck.> > Don't do the same thing every kid drawing wannabee manga does, nobody gives a duck that you can draw perfect anime eyes with reflexes and all that generic Asian stuff, if you can't put them on a face that doesn't look like a monkey's ass.You use a lot of sarcasm in your criticism. I can see where you're getting at, and I totally agree. The reason why I said that I will work on the expressions is because it is something that significantly stands out.I realize that my anatomy is completely off, but its not something very easy for me to see. Yes, it is something I try to work on frequently, however my improvement in that area is very scarce.I appreciate your advice :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 my name is kusy and im better than everyone elseI honestly see nothing wrong with the faces, except for the one where the chick looks extremely surprised. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The New World Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 @Kusy:> Great idea, work on expressions that you can do pretty decently, just because Rose told you so,'Cause I'm a boss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BluBear Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 I kind of like this new one, but for the old ones, you should take Kusy's advice and research some proportions for the body.You could look up MarkCrilley on youtube for some manga drawing tutorials if you haven't already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 @SuperSake:> my name is kusy and im better than everyone else> > I honestly see nothing wrong with the faces, except for the one where the chick looks extremely surprised.What's your problem bro? The faces are best part of his works and I said it, if you can't read, it's not really my problem Fuu.All I'm saying is that he shouldn't try to improve things he already can do, trying to catch up with everything else to that level would be smarter, I don't see how you could possibly misunderstand what I wrote unless you stopped reading after the first line.As for the drawings, it's easy to practice and do things you can do. While I'm pretty good at boosting my own ego, it's not the best idea to do so when trying to actually improve at something. As I said - you can improve your faces, but the better they'll look the dumber they'll seem when everything else is off.And Rose, I wouldn't dare to imply otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 22, 2012 Author Share Posted February 22, 2012 New drawing, A chibi for a side project of mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 It's not a chibi, it's a person with a massive head. Chibis need to be cute and chubby, not just have a huge cranium. Also, I think the arms look weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 22, 2012 Author Share Posted February 22, 2012 @Eckhart:> It's not a chibi, it's a person with a massive head. Chibis need to be cute and chubby, not just have a huge cranium. Also, I think the arms look weird.Thats what I was aiming for. The arms are weird, I probably messed up on the line art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynxaria Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 I quite like your art style, I can't draw worth a damn thus I admire anyone who can really draw a human figure. I particularly like the bold lines, nice.The last picture you have there reminds me of Bordeaux from .hack. I've gone all nostalgic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BluBear Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 Well, that drawing has some serious issues, and you're not following too much of the advice that people in this topic gave you didn't you :)I'll just tell you some stuff that i see wrong with the drawing.The shading is not consistant.Her left side is totally wrong anatomically and not eye pleasing at all. (The bulky zig zag shoulder and arm and too thin leg especially)The general perspective but especially the armor is also totally inconsistent which makes the legs seem handicapped.Observing some real human anatomy will help you greatly even if you are going with this anime cutsy style.Well, good luck on your next one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted February 22, 2012 Author Share Posted February 22, 2012 @Hybrid.:> Well, that drawing has some serious issues, and you're not following too much of the advice that people in this topic gave you didn't you :)> > I'll just tell you some stuff that i see wrong with the drawing.> The shading is not consistant.> Her left side is totally wrong anatomically and not eye pleasing at all. (The bulky zig zag shoulder and arm and too thin leg especially)> The general perspective but especially the armor is also totally inconsistent which makes the legs seem handicapped.> Observing some real human anatomy will help you greatly even if you are going with this anime cutsy style.> > Well, good luck on your next one.Thanks for pointing it out! I greatly appreciate it as its very hard for me to see some of these problems without someone pointing it out.Believe it or not I try really hard on getting the anatomy and perspective just right, but I can't see the problems myself. So its really helpful when you point them out!Its not that I'm not following the advice, but I just have some troubles seeing them. The problems with my shading is obvious, even for me. I will keep practicing :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 Hips don't usually grow out on the same level where your rib cage ends, hands usually have elbows and legs usually are the same length and thicknessā¦ also, neck rarely grows out of your right arm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 @Kusy:> What's your problem bro? The faces are best part of his works and I said it, if you can't read, it's not really my problem Fuu.> > All I'm saying is that he shouldn't try to improve things he already can do, trying to catch up with everything else to that level would be smarter, I don't see how you could possibly misunderstand what I wrote unless you stopped reading after the first line.> > As for the drawings, it's easy to practice and do things you can do. While I'm pretty good at boosting my own ego, it's not the best idea to do so when trying to actually improve at something. As I said - you can improve your faces, but the better they'll look the dumber they'll seem when everything else is off.> > And Rose, I wouldn't dare to imply otherwise.If you can't put them on a face that doesn't look like a monkey's ass? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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