Fuu Posted March 30, 2012 Author Share Posted March 30, 2012 Oh, and criticism, please.[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#f5bece969a7422138f9aea187dbf0a43.png)Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nilly70 Posted March 30, 2012 Share Posted March 30, 2012 crimson rose rite?It looks cool :) *thumbs up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted March 30, 2012 Author Share Posted March 30, 2012 Yes, I just wanted to make sure people could read past the swirly cursive.And thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted March 30, 2012 Share Posted March 30, 2012 legible and fairly sexy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustinSD Posted March 30, 2012 Share Posted March 30, 2012 Grant.Undress now.Crimson RoseAlthough on the R, looks like a Mini Large B on the left leg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted March 30, 2012 Author Share Posted March 30, 2012 @JustinSD:> Although on the R, looks like a Mini Large B on the left leg.Oh fuck, I didn't even see that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynxaria Posted March 30, 2012 Share Posted March 30, 2012 Other then the mini B, looks good. I hate when people use a script font where it's so loopy that you can't read wtf it's suppose to say, gj. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted March 31, 2012 Author Share Posted March 31, 2012 Removed the B. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nilly70 Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 much better!!! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harrison858 Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Much better than the first one, however the R still looks a bit too curly and someone may mistake it for "Crimson Bose" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 I think that one tail of the R should wrap around all of 'rose' instead of looping back. Might clear up some confusions or murkiness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
juvanio Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 It looks pretty good, is that a logo for another ROSE online server perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickey Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 Looks awesome. I don't really like the way the "R" kind of connects to "Crimson" though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmiguu Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 It's more legible than our founding fathers' handwriting, that's for sure…You're going for more than just text, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 Clitoris Pose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 I still think there's too much going on around the 'R'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 @Fuu:> Oh, and criticism, please.> [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#18cc3c459c809db5370e7c930a2e58f1.png)> Editedbloody good.The start of Rose is a tiny bit busy and I don't think the internal swirl on the o helps with the readibility of the word overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted April 5, 2012 Author Share Posted April 5, 2012 Removed some of the swirls.[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#c8f2d121326fd005058ced729a50d2a8.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 Looks a lot better now.There's still a swirl inside the first 'o' though. Personally, I'd remove it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted April 5, 2012 Author Share Posted April 5, 2012 Missed that. It's fixed now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 I thought it was fine with all the swirls. I don't know how people could have trouble reading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted April 5, 2012 Author Share Posted April 5, 2012 Eh, they probably just didn't like how complicated it was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 @Eckhart:> I thought it was fine with all the swirls. I don't know how people could have trouble reading it.It was perfectly legible, but I'm guessing many prefer a more clean look. The use of swirls previously could have seemed like it was abused in some perspectives. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 @Eckhart:> I thought it was fine with all the swirls. I don't know how people could have trouble reading it.Think about it as a captcha. It's still legible but is annoying to read at the same time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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