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  1. Bret

    O!

    ![](http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_la5tkoh58Q1qakq87o1_500.jpg) OOOooOOooooooOOO
  2. From PW to MS to this and everything in between. So I guess 7ish years? Still lurking like a boss. I just like seeing everyone's creations.
  3. I made these a long time ago in hopes to make a hobby game. Realistically, I just don't care anymore. Anyone is free to use them in whichever way they'd like! I originally used them with a modified PVO source, so you may need to tweak them to fit your needs! Preview: >! http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf2/index.php/topic,66260.msg713902.html#msg713902 >! ![](http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/2467/previewzy.png)
  4. Your bottom sword looks like it has hands with which are holding swords of their own. Swords on swords on swords.
  5. Bret

    Sprite

    The hands aren't connected to the body.
  6. The shadows on your fences are all over the place. You should try to make them more consistent, because right now it looks like you have 5 suns.
  7. Bret

    Narwhal Games Logo

    The pixeling and the shine clash. I'd get rid of the shine and pixel a transition or something behind the letters.
  8. I like the concept, but I can't figure out what the change in color represents. Like: is it elevation change? terrain change? state borders?
  9. So many repetitive circle-like patterns :O
  10. That billboard looking sign thing on building one is really making me go limp. It's really noticeably flat. Maybe dither that sucker down a bit. They all look fantastic besides that. Although, the center line of the roof on building 2 (blue roof), looks kind of awkward. Like, I know what you were doing with the sorta half circle pieces, but I think it can be done in a slightly more appealing way. Maybe straight or slightly straighter lines.
  11. Bret

    Mirage Source 4

    Or you can take Origins, revert the bug fixes and features to its old state. And then re-fix said bugs. Best. Saturday. Night. Ever.
  12. The fact that the icons aren't centered on that bar is killing me :(
  13. The blackness really stands out. Idk if it was intentional but it could use something in the distance, grass, small village, mountains. Something. The snow could also use some detail, since its the mountains: maybe broken shards of rock, a snow covered stump, some sort of detail mark.
  14. Looks pretty, but the right side of the map looks sorta empty. Like you could easily throw a half a tree on the right side, or part of another house and it would make the map just that much better. Good work.
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