Mr.LLoyd Posted October 2, 2012 Share Posted October 2, 2012 The arms are too much at the back. It looks like the sprite is holding something and it hides it behind hes back. And the shading on the arms(a darker color than the rest of the sprite) gives that feel too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 2, 2012 Share Posted October 2, 2012 like anosora said, now try make some clothes for her and you will see it doesn't fit at all.the style is ok i like it, but needs some improvements, because it looks kinda chubby, take a look on the lower part of the body where the belly is, the shape is ok but it looks like not having waist at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted October 2, 2012 Author Share Posted October 2, 2012 I enjoy chubbier women, that's why she's chubby. Clothes will fit on her fine, but I'll still humor you and put some on. I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "no waist at all", so can you please elaborate on that?Anosora, I put the arms in the back like that on purpose. I find it fine, but if you can give me a reason why you think I shouldn't, I might consider changing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeffrit x Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 I like it, looks really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted October 3, 2012 Author Share Posted October 3, 2012 [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#0c07633174a4d49b8b540d1273a7a78e.png)Forgot to make the clothes because I was making the gun and the faces. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeffrit x Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 Do you have a project, or you just doing this for fun.? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted October 3, 2012 Author Share Posted October 3, 2012 Well, the project hasn't been started yet, but yes, these will be used for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 If you like the chubby then it's ok, anyway its pretty nice.And about waist uhm i don't know how to say that in english… here is a picture  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted October 4, 2012 Author Share Posted October 4, 2012 I intentionally made the body smaller to try and have the perspective be more obvious, but I need to shade it a bit differently also.I'll be working on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted October 31, 2012 Author Share Posted October 31, 2012 I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IM DOING[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#045f714dfc7c544781d72863fbccb5a1.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fyr Posted October 31, 2012 Share Posted October 31, 2012 Slimfast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted October 31, 2012 Share Posted October 31, 2012 > Slimfast.He likes big booty bitches.> I enjoy chubbier women, that's why she's chubby.The second one isn't bad, but the peg legs aren't cutting it, the detailing above the chest looks like a protruding ribcage, and I feel the belly button "slit" shouldn't be so obvious.I prefer some of your earlier sprites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted November 1, 2012 Author Share Posted November 1, 2012 Eh, can you elaborate on the ribcage bit?Also, if you meant that you think they should have feet, I just haven't put the feet on yet. I'm trying to get the actual legs looking right. Which is definitely the hardest thing I've ever done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted November 2, 2012 Author Share Posted November 2, 2012 ducking[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#04d592e4defe361a2d8c942cf4ac913b.png)Edit button does not work at school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted November 3, 2012 Author Share Posted November 3, 2012 Reply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 1 or 2\. 3 and 4 are meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 After weeks of playing random games and Halo 4, this.[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#64727c8e88051b65b13a32b3f8035171.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted November 16, 2012 Share Posted November 16, 2012 > After weeks of playing random games and Halo 4, this.> > [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#64727c8e88051b65b13a32b3f8035171.png)Give the body brighter highlights.. it will match the tree better. Anyway, i like what youve done. Tree looks quite nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted November 16, 2012 Share Posted November 16, 2012 The tree is excellent if you were going for a horizontal perspective. Otherwise, it needs some adjusting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eleyond Posted November 16, 2012 Share Posted November 16, 2012 I really like your art, and to nook is giving great criticism  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted November 16, 2012 Author Share Posted November 16, 2012 > Give the body brighter highlights.. it will match the tree better. Anyway, i like what youve done. Tree looks quite nice.Add highlights, you mean. They're non-existent, Lol. I was actually changing the body once again, because of a picture I drew. Highlights are something I'll remember to add. Thank you, sir.Yeah Nook, I was thinking about that also. Only problem is, I'm having trouble keeping a texture on the tree, while making it look… Three dimensional, I suppose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted November 22, 2012 Author Share Posted November 22, 2012 Bumpdate.[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#3fde8dd8f73f78037cc405c3d4ce8628.png)Random colors. ~~The darker skintone needs to be edited more (shading wise)~~, and the sideways sprite is not complete yet. I really ducked up those leaves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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