shrig94 Posted April 2, 2009 Author Share Posted April 2, 2009 Erm…I'm not that great, recommendations gladly taken as well as ratings and areas to improve on...It is my first ever sprite...![](http://i40.tinypic.com/34hz4f9.jpg)Here is a warrior I made, is the shading good?![](http://i44.tinypic.com/ac8shy.png)warrior edit:![](http://i39.tinypic.com/vngkt1.png)The third is a shroom with a more modern style!![](http://i39.tinypic.com/21aerdw.png)Shroom Edit:![](http://i41.tinypic.com/34sj6g0.png)Mario Time!![](http://i39.tinypic.com/23m1ua1.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 head looks weird but i like the asian look. :azn: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 2, 2009 Author Share Posted April 2, 2009 Thanks, I think I need to make the eyes a little skinnierIf anyone wants to look at the psd, I can upload it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 you cant tell the eyes are blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 2, 2009 Author Share Posted April 2, 2009 I'm able to see the blue in the eyes, but it might be because I know they are blue. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 it looks like you pillow shaded a lil biti recommend staying away from doin that lolthats what im tryin to do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 2, 2009 Author Share Posted April 2, 2009 How am I supposed to shade? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 Choose different colors that look hardly different from the main color - Lighter or darker - and start pixeling them in in a pattern, such as[][][][/color][][][][/color][][][][/color]-Alpha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 Is it a full set of 12 positions or just a pic? I don't consider it a sprite unless you have all the positions. I think for a custom however its pretty damn cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 3, 2009 Author Share Posted April 3, 2009 Thanks. It's just a pic, once I get enough comments, or one that explains explicitly what needs to be done to improve it, I will finish it and make all 12 positions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 ![](http://i44.tinypic.com/ac8shy.png)Its my second sprite, a warrior this time. Comment and rate please, and if anyone knows of a better skin tone please post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 A peach tone, maybe more tan since he'd probably have been in the heat of battle, with the sun on him..Still, more of a peachy color. Unless it is supposed to be a zombie.-Alpha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 I was trying to make him look young and epic failed, on my next update, I'll definitely peach him up. Oh and does anyone wanna request me to make something, so I can get practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 Make a shroom, it'll be pretty nice practice.(That's what I did- it actually turned out quite nice.)-Alpha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 like a mario mushroom? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 Something like that.-Alpha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 Here is The shroom.![](http://i39.tinypic.com/21aerdw.png)I decided to take a twist on my style, like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 ummm…good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 Shroom looks like a gas tank holding a bazooka O_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 IT DOES! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 welll…. I can't really say anything about the sprite, it's a whole nother style than anything i've done.For the armor, it looks like it's just gradient shaded from the top left to the bottom right. Try putting actual parts of armor in. I.e. shade the shoulder pads, then put a dark line under them and shade the chest plate.For the shroom.......................... wtf. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 Lol, well I was going for the mech-shroom…As for the armor, do you have examples of something similar to what you were saying ghost?Btw, anyone have another practice request? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 Here is an edit on the warrior, I kinda fixed the skin and added more definition to the armor: ![](http://i39.tinypic.com/vngkt1.png)Here is the shroom edit, I shaded it and colored it, looks more evil now:![](http://i41.tinypic.com/34sj6g0.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeross Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 It has a way to pinkish skin(the d00d)Regards, Xeross Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 yeah, now that I see it on these lighter forums, he does look way pinkish. What'd you think of the shroom? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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