bobalujr9 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Share Posted November 27, 2009 This is the first sprite i made and i want some feed back on how to make better ones in general or just make this one better.[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#a0384f1363f446e26c117cf7068ed48c.bmp)Yes, I tried to blow it up but it looked weird and the colors screwed up.Thanks for your time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeyB2k9 Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 @bobalujr9:> This is the first sprite i made and i want some feed back on how to make better ones in general or just make this one better.> [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#a0384f1363f446e26c117cf7068ed48c.bmp)> Yes, I tried to blow it up but it looked weird and the colors screwed up.> Thanks for your time.I hate making RPG sprites, for the simple fact its hard to get everything right (Especially the perspective and proportion)However, you need a 45 degree face on / face down angle. Rather than a full on front angle.The head is normally larger because of this, only shows the top half of the face and shows the top half of the top of the head (hair).The body would then be approx the same width as normal, only half the height, same with legs. and then the feet.Try looking at some existing ones and see how you do.Regards, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 @bobalujr9:> This is the first sprite i made and i want some feed back on how to make better ones in general or just make this one better.> [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#a0384f1363f446e26c117cf7068ed48c.bmp)> Yes, I tried to blow it up but it looked weird and the colors screwed up.> Thanks for your time.omg! it has moobs and a 6 pack surrounded in his ribs 0.o?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bobalujr9 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Share Posted November 27, 2009 Nah man he's uber buff and those are pecs and just a six pack…You can't blame me for trying... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 i know, its just that they are all over the place… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeyB2k9 Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 Hey bob, u got me started :P I tried my first real attempt at making my own sprite from scratch :)The hairs actually pretty neat i think, probs overranks the rest of him lol :)hope u dont mind me posting it here in ur thread, u can use it for reference if u want, also look at other sprites and see how theyre done.I did this one from memory, without looking at anything, i think the lower part of him maybe a little scrawny :) Please dont use my gfx, if you really feel the desire to, then ask me politely in pm, and give me a good enough reason why u want to use them, and why maybe i should let you? :)Hope this helps you with urs aswell mate :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
defendersdef Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 mikey, we really cant use it exept for tiles cause you didnt post the whole sprite sheet thing. (walking) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 1\. Technical problems, is it's too high up. RMXP sprites are not really 64 pixels tall; they are maybe 48 px, and usually not even that tall.One problem a lot of GFX artists for Eclipse don't factor is that your sprite will be aligned on the bottom 32x32 section of a 32x64 sprite. So for your tall sprite it would look oddly offset, or atleast the hit detection wouldn't work too well. But another thing is, with such a tall sprite you have to take more care with how you use fringes in your tiles (actually messing with 32x32 sized sprites in CoI, there are quite some benefits to that sprite size with regards to mapping versatility).2\. Aesthetic problems: torso is way way too long, and the perspective of the sprite is too side-view; for a "top-down" game your sprites need to show a little but of their top instead of a straight side perspective. (This also applies to tileset objects.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bobalujr9 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Share Posted November 27, 2009 Comment and critic…[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#a88c5ecafa9f4489f3be4ed84a17bf16.bmp)Any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrisaub Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 Alot better or mabye because they have cloths? anyways heres one of i tried [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#9baad42d6755b0202d53a5331646e42b.jpg)and i know the girl has a flat chest i just made the guy have long hair :D please comment these are the guys in my game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bobalujr9 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Share Posted November 27, 2009 u need to use shading a lot more, look up tutorials on blending and shading, add more depth to each of them and focus on parts of the body that stick out, the shoulder, hips, and whatever else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minilinkki Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 i wish kreator were here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bobalujr9 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Share Posted November 27, 2009 ok… a little off topic.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeyB2k9 Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 @bobalujr9:> Comment and critic…> [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#a88c5ecafa9f4489f3be4ed84a17bf16.bmp)> > Any better?Getting there :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeyB2k9 Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 @defendersdef:> mikey, we really cant use it exept for tiles cause you didnt post the whole sprite sheet thing. (walking)I always ask ppl not 2 use my gfx esp without asking me. - Its not a full sprite set but its still a gfx people could use :) - shop npc for instance? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted November 29, 2009 Share Posted November 29, 2009 Anorexia ftw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted November 29, 2009 Share Posted November 29, 2009 Well.. When pixeling on such a small area, you need to learn NOT to put full detail. so.. Don't actually try to pixel out a six pack.. instead pixel the illusion of a six pack.. Also.. under pecks.. your stomach doesn't go inwards.Also.. dimension wise.. your pecks and the area of your abs.. are roughly the same height.. so even out the distance.You did improve.. but you still have a while to go. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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