Working on a barbarian sprite {Practice}

[Techno 5.0]

hey guys ive been working on this for the past 5 mins
and was wantign some feedback so far.
this is just practice

Original

Update 1

[guzmanm]

Well, firt off you should finish the legs and color it ;D

[Techno 5.0]

@GuzmanM:

> Well, firt off you should finish the legs and color it ;D

well yeah i know
im not finished yet
just wanted to know if i was doin good or not

[Chief]

Wow, ninja, you certainly have improved greatly since your past work.

[zade_o]

Hmm, the arms look a bit odd to me, kinda like he grabbed someone by the shoulders and is shaking them.

And the stomach has that ethiopian adopt-a-child kinda look. I've found that with abs, it turns out better if you don't try to draw each seperate muscle and instead just shade to make that whole section stand out somewhat.

I'll do an edit later when I'm on my computer again. It's not a bad start, just needs a few tweaks

[Techno 5.0]

@Ghost:

> And the stomach has that ethiopian adopt-a-child kinda look.

Lol

thanks for the critism

[demon xxx x]

straight down arms, I'll work on that for you, but bro.. you're getting better than me xD

[Techno 5.0]

lol maybe.

[Sowtis]

His arms are a bit odd?

Right now he looks like a genie without legs haha!

So far it looks good though.

EDIT: The colors are making it look better.

[Techno 5.0]

i was thinking bout givin him hair
but im not so sure if i should

[zade_o]

fixed up his shoulders, torso, abs, and waist a bit.

I really don't know what kinda pose you're going for with the arms so I left those out for now.


[Chief]

I dont like the colors…