Socuine Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 Hey guys,today I will show you a WIP I'm working on. It's going to be the Ambershire logo (a project I'm working on with Toranos).Anyway, I made this logo in MSPAINT, haha, no? Kay.**Here it is:**Be honest, post constructive critism and feedback so I can improve this logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sealbreaker Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 I think the text looks ok but there's pretty much nothing around the text… it looks a bit uninteresting....-seal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 @Sealbreaker:> I think the text looks ok but there's pretty much nothing around the text… it looks a bit uninteresting....> > -sealHey, thanks for your feedback. I agree about the empty-ness. I updated the first thread with another image. Not much of a change but I added a slogan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sealbreaker Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 Have you tried experimenting with the texts size? See what looks best. But you definately need to add something besides the text to make it look interesting… idk what fits your game's theme but you should consider that-seal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 The custom S is nice. If you could incorporate that cool swish into the logo somehow it might make a diffrence. Maybe use the same style swish to make a simple border or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 Sorta like this maybe: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 @Ambard:> Sorta like this maybe:Hey, I like what you did with the swirls. I just don't like the solar thing, but those swirls on both sides of the slogan are pretty slick! Thanks for the suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 np, figured you could do it up right if ya had a little sugetion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 I, personally, Like it as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 HUGE waste of space on either side. Looks good, otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 @Roberto:> HUGE waste of space on either side. Looks good, otherwise.Obviously a web banner, or something like it… lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sealbreaker Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 I liked ambards version with the shine. Looked better to me :confused:-seal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 @Sealbreaker:> I liked ambards version with the shine. Looked better to me :confused:> > -sealI didn't add any shine because that would violate my likings xD.@Chief:> Obviously a web banner, or something like it… lolYeah, it's used as a Web Banner.@Ambard:> Sorta like this maybe:Hey, I added your idea to my design, I kinda do it differently than your concept though: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 I think that really framed it nice and brought it all out well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 @Ambard:> I think that really framed it nice and brought it all out well.It is thanks to you my friend. It was a great idea which I will surely enjoy! :)If you have any more ideas, I'd gladly hear them from you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 Meh, I say to keep it as the orignla, or use those t"wings" around the bottom line of text, and ditch the one on the "S" … Thats just me though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 That's a banner, not a logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 The logo is on the banner.Go be British elsewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 Kobeki loves me. He made me this signature and avatar 7 years ago.Go be a newfag elsewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 @Robin:> That's a banner, not a logo.I was gonna say. It's a nice banner. But a logo is an image that signifies the title. Speaking of which a nice logo might go along good with this. Just a thought. It's very nice btw. 4/5 stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSchilli1 Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 I like it a lot. The second version just brings out the text more. Good job!-JS1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 @Chief:> Meh, I say to keep it as the orignla, or use those t"wings" around the bottom line of text, and ditch the one on the "S" … Thats just me though.Mhm.. I see, I'll try that later, thanks!@Robin:> That's a banner, not a logo.Meh, thanks for the reply Robin xD.@Robin:> Kobeki loves me. He made me this signature and avatar 7 years ago.> Go be a newfag elsewhere.You bet I made that.@Murdoc:> I was gonna say. It's a nice banner. But a logo is an image that signifies the title. Speaking of which a nice logo might go along good with this. Just a thought. It's very nice btw. 4/5 starsThank you very much! :D@JS1:> I like it a lot. The second version just brings out the text more. Good job!> > -JS1Thanks, I appreciate your reply ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZoSo Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 I think it looks great. Its simple and nice, yet fancy.Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marsh Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 Looks nice maybe as a header for a site or something. The subtleties of the background dont really show up unless i lean up and look at the image directly. Maybe make them stand out a bit more so it doesnt just look like black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 @ZoSo:> I think it looks great. Its simple and nice, yet fancy.> > Good jobThanks! I share the same feeling. :]@Marsh:> Looks nice maybe as a header for a site or something. The subtleties of the background dont really show up unless I lean up and look at the image directly. Maybe make them stand out a bit more so it doesnt just look like black.It is used as a Header, currently only for a Forum though. I'm modifying the subtitles to make it jump out more. I will show you guys a modified version this evening! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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