Toahst Posted November 19, 2011 Author Share Posted November 19, 2011 This is my cartoon-ish style tavern that i made for my game. I just wanted to know what you guys thought of it.![](http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/1469/taverna.png)Update:![](http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/9969/tavernn.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted November 19, 2011 Share Posted November 19, 2011 Replace the text on the sign with an image of a glass of beer or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toahst Posted November 19, 2011 Author Share Posted November 19, 2011 @Robin:> Replace the text on the sign with an image of a glass of beer or something.hmm.. didn't think of that, good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToshiroHayate Posted November 19, 2011 Share Posted November 19, 2011 I like the style. The roof could use some light shading though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted November 19, 2011 Share Posted November 19, 2011 @Toshiro:> I like the style. The roof could use some light shading though.And with that said, the only thing I've to say is add colors to the blank windows. Since when are windows white? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted November 20, 2011 Share Posted November 20, 2011 Lineart and your individual style is adequate, but you should look into shading a lot more, and working on a color palette to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rob Janes Posted November 20, 2011 Share Posted November 20, 2011 You have some shading in there, a touch up on the shading would be nice, but I think the palette suits the style of art.In my opinion it looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted November 20, 2011 Share Posted November 20, 2011 The bricks,walls,windows,roof need some shading but the line art is very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toahst Posted November 23, 2011 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 My Tavern has been updated! Thanks for the tips guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toranos Posted November 23, 2011 Share Posted November 23, 2011 Great improvement, really liking the roofing now. Just one thing, try smooth out your pixel curves, they are a bit too jagged.Example: ![](http://www.merrimint.org/toranos/Image3.png)Other than that, good job Milk. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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