Jumbofile Posted January 12, 2012 Author Share Posted January 12, 2012 First of all its pronounced oak-um…fist attempt[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#9369c772c119ce85911fba358410eed7.png)Second attempt[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#f511c5a9992ea6e08b0fda6eb30798c7.png)Did i improve it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilbunnie Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 Leaf looks bad and unnatural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenton Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 I don't like the leafs position, you should keep the logo compact like it was in the first logo. You could have the leaf overlapping the 'O' slightly.The leaf graphic looks OK IMO, but the smooth gradient effect makes it look flat when in fact it should be [crumpley](http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/c/cf/Eenbruinigherfstblad.jpg/220px-Eenbruinigherfstblad.jpg).You should remove the shadows from the leaf and "Free ORPG", however I like the shadow on "Oakhum".For the text "Free ORPG" I think it would look better a little smaller and in a more blockish font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 First one was much, much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetasis Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 I like the second one myself its just way to big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helpmeplz Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 Nah you didn't improve it, you also have some positioning problems. Start over but this time go with the idea of the first one, but take the "Free MMO" and position it somewhere on the bottom and a leaf would look better curved on the right side. Also get some better leaves lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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