New big 50x50 sprite

[Jacquelinett]

Critic please:



UPDATED:


[Wing]

The top of the head isn't very smooth, but other than that I would say fix the colours for now.
I was attempting to make one for you but I gave up.


[Fuu]

Your legs are stuck together, your hands are in front of the body, your heads are extremely lopsided, and they have no ears. Parts of your sprite are pillow shaded, and parts of it aren't. Wing's example is something you should probably take inspiration from. The only crit I have on his is that the body is a little thick, and that isn't really much of a problem.

I'm going to go practice shading like that, it's something I've been trying to do for a while now.

[Chief]

You generally will make a sprite/tile in multiples of 32, so you should aim for 64x64, not 50x50.

[Jacquelinett]

@Chief:

> You generally will make a sprite/tile in multiples of 32, so you should aim for 64x64, not 50x50.

You "generally" will make a sprite/tile in multiples of 32

"Generally"

"GENERALLY"

Nah

Generally = doesnt have too

since im writing my own C++ engine i dont think it matter?

[Chief]

No, but its a smart move, as screen resolutions run in multiples of 32\. So it always just been the number that you work by. I would suggest that you do so.

[Jacquelinett]

@Chief:

> No, but its a smart move, as screen resolutions run in multiples of 32\. So it always just been the number that you work by. I would suggest that you do so.

so you are telling me to expand the square to 64x64, yet keep the sprite size the same? :P

It work too :P

[Chief]

Yes, or redo your sprite? You could also consider doing 48x48, which is a multiple of 16, and would be found acceptable as well.

[Jacquelinett]

@Chief:

> Yes, or redo your sprite? You could also consider doing 48x48, which is a multiple of 16, and would be found acceptable as well.

redo? :O

im lazy… why cant i stick with 50x50?

[Wing]

You don't have to re do it, but you can place your 50 x 50 sprite on a sheet that is 64 x 64.

[Jacquelinett]

@Wing:

> You don't have to re do it, but you can place your 50 x 50 sprite on a sheet that is 64 x 64.

@Yumi-chan:

> so you are telling me to expand the square to 64x64, yet keep the sprite size the same? :P
>
> It work too :P

That what I said

[Fogger]

The underwear is too bright. The line art looks fine except for the top of the head looks a bit too jagged and the line in between the ear and the face needs to go (on front view only, back view it looks fine). A bit more shading work here and there and you should be good.

[Ruins of Hell]

@Yumi-chan:

> since im writing my own C++ engine i dont think it matter?

Actually, it matters _a lot_. Rendering in powers of two (1x1, 2x2, 4x4, 8x8, 16x16, 32x32, 64x64, etc.) is faster than rendering in not power-of-two (NPOT). Some graphics cards don't support NPOT texturing period, so you'll get weird artifacts.

It's absolutely OK to just put it on a bigger sprite sheet though without changing anything.

[Chief]

@Fogger:

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[Anonymious]

I like your sprites a lot, good for games where you only can walk with W and S…

@Chief:

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Hey look it's Mr TrollFace ^^

[Marsh]

To much clothing

[Fuu]

@Anonymious:

> I like your sprites a lot, good for games where you only can walk with W and S…

You're an idiot and a hypocrite. ;v

@Soul:

> Some graphics cards don't support NPOT texturing period, so you'll get weird artifacts.

Yeah, on my computer graphics like that get fucked up in-game. Just make it 64x64.

[Jacquelinett]

Updated

@Marsh:

> To much clothing

TROLLOL

[Wing]

I see a boy in boxers, then I see a boy wearing female underwear. : D

You need to make the female body look more feminine.

[Jacquelinett]

@Wing:

> I see a boy in boxers, then I see a boy wearing female underwear. : D
>
> You need to make the female body look more feminine.

eh… how?

[Fogger]

@Yumi-chan:

> eh… how?

Give her some hips and make her boobs cover her arms a bit. Here's a quick 2 min edit.

[Wing]

Most females have deeper curves on the sides than males, and have a smaller build.

I`ll put a picture that consists of two differently styled sprites I`ve made

Notice how the female in both styles can be easily told apart from the male? Right now both your sprites are equal except for what under garments they wear, but you can easily change that by making the girl have a smaller and more feminine build.

[Fuu]

Wing, your sprite's arms are too short. ;v
Yumi, I don't think you're listening. FIX THE LOPSIDED HEAD. The sideways sprite is even worse. It looks like a potato. A really, really, really fucked up potato. Also, your females are the exact same thing as your males. The body is also very large in proportion to the head.

[Wing]

@SuperSake:

> Wing, your sprite's arms are too short. ;v
> Yumi, I don't think you're listening. FIX THE LOPSIDED HEAD. The sideways sprite is even worse. It looks like a potato. A really, really, really ducked up potato. Also, your females are the exact same thing as your males. The body is also very large in proportion to the head.

I'm not a pixel artist ;v /excuses

The head on Yumi's sprite needs to be more smooth.

[deathtaker26]

once apon a time, I made a sprite that was 320x320, it looked like a large french fry you would get at mcdonalds. I was proud of it. The end