KoalaHugs Posted September 22, 2012 Author Share Posted September 22, 2012 if i died today,would you start to cry,or ask the stars about,just why i had to die,or would you brush it off,and just forget that i was gone,then go about your day as if,nothing could go wrong,do you really want to lay here,with me right by your side,after i was buried,could you say you never cried,would you miss the sound,of my laughter in your ears,and drown out the sound of silence,with the falling of your tears,right now i must confess,that even i dont want me here,and i dont think i would miss me,or even shed a tear,for someone like myself,does not deserve true love from you,but if i died today,please tell me what you'd do,would you brush it off,or maybe start to cry,for i need to know the truth,in case, by chance, i die. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlatlanD Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 It's really nice poem  Keep going bro  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoalaHugs Posted September 22, 2012 Author Share Posted September 22, 2012 Apparently now i'm a bro too! .3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agoraphobic Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 I was enjoying the poem, until all the spelling errors started appearing at the end. In my opinion the poem lost it's meaning when the sentences started sounding like a 6 year old typed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoalaHugs Posted September 22, 2012 Author Share Posted September 22, 2012 Sorry my keyboard is broken! I'll fix it when i can! D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoalaHugs Posted September 22, 2012 Author Share Posted September 22, 2012 There i fixed it. .3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
damian666 Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 awww… i get a own poem? you like perverts huh? xd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay RH Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 > awww… i get a own poem? you like perverts huh? xdI'm gonna laugh my ass off now. As for the poem, I don't see the point in it, it seems rather dramatic. If you really have feelings I'll say that you don't at all show it…very low feeling. And if it was for fun, that's cool of you, but let me keep laughing my ass off at Damian's post. Good one Bro Damian, good one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoalaHugs Posted September 23, 2012 Author Share Posted September 23, 2012 Its not FOR him really. He said he would think my poetry was like; "Roses are redish. Violets are blueish. If it wasn't for jesus we'd all be jewish!" But its not that bad. Its not like romance… Eew. Hes a perv. =3= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoalaHugs Posted September 23, 2012 Author Share Posted September 23, 2012 P.s. WABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABA! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marsh Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 How touching Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted September 23, 2012 Share Posted September 23, 2012 Your avatar is annoying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoalaHugs Posted September 23, 2012 Author Share Posted September 23, 2012 Omg thank you for both of those comments! I love annoying avatars, and gravity falls. WABAWABAWABAWABAWABAWABA! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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