Imaguest Posted March 4, 2013 Author Share Posted March 4, 2013 Made this, need opinions.I'm in no way an artist. Just wanted to try my hand at making a sword.Thanks.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bintin Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 Looks great, is this your first try? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 Not bad, I'd suggest trying to shade it. What's with the shadow all around the sword? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imaguest Posted March 5, 2013 Author Share Posted March 5, 2013 Yeah first try.And it's to make it stand out at first it was on a clear background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMF Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 looks very well done !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jumbofile Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 The blade looks flat and has no shine but besides that its great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fogger Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 Yes add clearer shadows and a highlight for good measure. The greys in your sword are too similar and dont stand out as much as the black outline so it looks all like 1 color.The shape is good though just work on getting the lighting right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boyesjs03 Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 Looks nice, gotta start somewhere  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted March 7, 2013 Share Posted March 7, 2013 Good lineart, however your color choice could use a bit of work. The contrast between each shade is barely noticable which makes the blade look flat instead of sharp and made out of iron. Also, why did you make a dark outerglow around the sword? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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