Rayo Posted July 23, 2008 Author Share Posted July 23, 2008 This is the first map that I've ever made for quite some time. Feel free to criticize. I'd like some suggestions on how I could map better. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobounds Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 This is map is great! 10/10The only Problem with this map is in the bottom right by the water, The lamppost is on the grass and sand, This isn't a bad thing but, most likely a city/town wont put an electric device near water.Great Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayo Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 True. I feel dumb now lol.I'ma also point out that above the lamppost is a tree missing the top half. I am aware of this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenton Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 It's a great map and i have no bad comments about it but i think that dogs gonna suicide of that cliff in a minute.. I give it 8/10\. If your whole game had all maps like these then it's going to get many players! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vrage Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 @Alex:> It's a great map and i have no bad comments about it but i think that dogs gonna suicide of that cliff in a minute.. I give it 8/10\. If your whole game had all maps like these then it's going to get many players!give the dog a break :PI like this map 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayo Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 Hah. Alex has a point. The dog belongs to the child at the bottom of the cliff. I was going to make the first quest be finding his dog for him, so I figured I'd make it pretty straight forward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Other than the errors on the ocean part, its a nice map.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdf318 Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 i give it an 8/10.only problem i have with it is the lily bads on the sand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klanz_online Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 9.5/10thats not sand its shallow water… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 Last time I checked, the sea doesn't have lily pads growing in it. They grow in still water. And before you all say 'It could be a lake', lakes don't have beaches. Sand is created by the tide, lily pads wont grow in water which has a tide. Contradiction much? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 lol.8.5/10It also looks like the tree is called "Granny Tina." Rofl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted July 29, 2008 Share Posted July 29, 2008 I like the paths, and the map in general. Only things that are off are the lily pads in the water, basically what Robin said - also they look like they are there to camoflage an incomplete corner water tile. Also, the tree near the top is messed up. The trunk shows the tree is placed farther back than the wall of the building, yet the foliage of the tree shows it in front.Oh, and about the lamp post, there were lamps like that before electrification, so I don't see any problem with its location (even if it was electrical, big whoop its still alright). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted July 29, 2008 Share Posted July 29, 2008 Those lamps aren't electric. They're gas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soljah Posted July 29, 2008 Share Posted July 29, 2008 @Robin:> Last time I checked, the sea doesn't have lily pads growing in it. They grow in still water. And before you all say 'It could be a lake', lakes don't have beaches. Sand is created by the tide, lily pads wont grow in water which has a tide. Contradiction much? :DIt could be a lake. Your a dumbass if you think lakes don't have tides. A tide is caused by movement, a lake is effected by wind as well as earth. Wind isn't in constant motion, so the force on the surface of the lake becomes 0, >0, 0, >0, 0, etc. Which causes a tide.But enough about that, I give the map an 8/10.Basically the same aspects as Anna pointed out, the tree/building bit, the few errors and what not. But nice map for a 'first'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted July 29, 2008 Share Posted July 29, 2008 @Robin:> Those lamps aren't electric. They're gas.Stating they are gas is the same as saying they are electric. You can't really tell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted July 30, 2008 Share Posted July 30, 2008 @Soljah:> It could be a lake. Your a dumbass if you think lakes don't have tides. A tide is caused by movement, a lake is effected by wind as well as earth. Wind isn't in constant motion, so the force on the surface of the lake becomes 0, >0, 0, >0, 0, etc. Which causes a tide.xDIf you're going to tell me what a tide is caused by, at least get it right.[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tide](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tide)@Anna:> Stating they are gas is the same as saying they are electric. You can't really tell.No, but you can have a very educated guess. Look at the context. Swords, bows + arrows, magic…Hey, they could be magic powered! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soljah Posted July 30, 2008 Share Posted July 30, 2008 @Hairo:> No offence but Soljah,> http://soljah.justgotowned.com> > I still think it's a good map though :PNo I wasn't. Robin, you are talking about Tide on a global scale, If you read up on that, its caused by the earth's/moons movement, gravitational pull and everything. I used to think like you do before I met my physics professor. He taught me all about the worlds Tides, and I asked the exact question "Do lakes have tides?". He replied yes, although they aren't as noticeable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted July 30, 2008 Share Posted July 30, 2008 @Robin:> No, but you can have a very educated guess. Look at the context. Swords, bows + arrows, magic…> > Hey, they could be magic powered!Or maybe an oil lamp? Remember gas powered is relatively recent, a precursor to electrification. To have gas powered lamps require an infrastructure to pipe the gas, whereas you can have a peasant light/restock an oil lamp anywhere.And you know what, lakes DO have beaches. They aren't as extensive as sea coasts but the banks of lakes can have beaches because although tidal forces aren't as powerful, they are still in effect. And as Soljah pointed out wind and other movement causes waves on lakes as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted July 30, 2008 Share Posted July 30, 2008 It's a pixel.. How it works is irrelevant.No matter which one it is, it'll work on the map, so it doesn't matter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted July 30, 2008 Share Posted July 30, 2008 I give it a 9/10\. I say that you should move the lamp a little. Wether it is gas or not, I dont think it should be on sand/in water. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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