Wing Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 ![](http://i485.photobucket.com/albums/rr217/Kagonin/avatar.jpg)this one was just practice.![](http://i485.photobucket.com/albums/rr217/Kagonin/Wing0002.jpg)better?![](http://i485.photobucket.com/albums/rr217/Kagonin/wing0003-1.jpg)another one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marsh Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 Looks pretty good, i always wish i knew how to draw.what tutorial are you following? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SEA8sG0FMHI&feature=channelmine wasnt as good, it was only my 3,4 try drawing manga XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 The Hair is nice, however, the structure of the head and the placing of the eyes are bad, keep practicing though. Learn anatomy, then turn that anatomy into a style of manga. That's what I'm doing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 Added another drawing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reguba Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 Mark Crilley is awesome! He is a great manga artist! I watch his videos even though I could never draw it if I tried ha ha! I still haven't gotten around to picking up the first volume of Miki Falls.Anyways! Wing you have a great start and with the tuts from Mark you should be going in no time, he covers everything from the eyes to wrinkles in clothing.Also a tip from me to you, pick up manga from a local book store… Doesn't matter which, just one that has well done art and pick up on little details from the pro's. That's how a lot of manga artists get started.Good luck and post more when ya make it! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 You're rough on your second drawing, or maybe it's charcoal, but anyways fix the eyes, I don't see an indication of any pupil and I'm guessing the hair is covering the nose? The neck is too short and the head too choppy. Also when you're sketching you don't need to go over it with charcoal or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 the scanner made it look like charcoal :Pthe hair is covering the nose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 Oh, btw you're missing the eyebrows x]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reguba Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 Psh haha, eyebrows are not always needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 but it looks werid on certain drawinsgif they dontgood work thoi luv arti do abstract art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khachaturian Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 To one who knows almost nothing about manga/anime (me), they look pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 @Locke:> Psh haha, eyebrows are not always needed.To add facial emotion, and define a certain character is what I use eyebrows for. IMO, they're mandatory for a good Manga Character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khachaturian Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 Yea/agreeeyebrows mean alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reguba Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Depends really, in his pic yes I would say the face needs eyebrows. In manga typically a picture of one of the characters either focuses on body deatail (as in clothing) or facial detail(eyebrows!). Other wise they will obscure all detail to give an emotion to the characters entire body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted November 12, 2008 Author Share Posted November 12, 2008 hey guys, i drew another one, but i find that the detail gets ruined after scanning.Should i take a picture or scan? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nubzero Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Picture if scanning has ruined detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted November 12, 2008 Author Share Posted November 12, 2008 added another drawing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nubzero Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Nice drawing, Is it just me or does the hair look a touch odd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Everything below the waist needs to be fixed up. Legs are fudged. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anasky Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 ^agrreed :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wing Posted November 12, 2008 Author Share Posted November 12, 2008 if i knew what fudged meant i probably would be working on it right now XD.so um, what does fudged mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeross Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 think he means something like ducked Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reguba Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 Ah the hardest part of drawing… Getting the right proportions to body parts lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khachaturian Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 So very true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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